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June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Interesting addition to the story, though I'm just a touch conused between the sumary given and events as they've been unfolding. The summary mentioned the character "trying to find out" i Todd was indeed ehr brother, long lost. But here in this chapter (4) she seems to have figured it out, though hasn't said anything about it to him yet. Anyway, I find myself curious and reading this tale in spite of my usual tastes. It's well written and so-far true to the story and characters despite the alterations you've made, adding another character. Well done!