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October 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I don't think it's too wordy or dragging. I think the way it's written fits in with the overall aspect of the story and worldbuilding. It's that rarety of porn with genuinely compelling plot.
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October 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The story builds as a delightfully dark bit of hentai xenofiction and frankly put, it's rare to see this kind of story at all. I really like it in pure storytelling terms, and I hope you continue it. ^.^