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August 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far I'm looking forward to continuing to read and enjoy I hope you update very soon
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April 1, 2017 at 12:00 AM
A nice start to set the scene of this story. Liking the characters so far, the detailed inner thoughts are good. Wondering who the woman is and what her back story is. Only thing I would say is that the grammar is a little off and sometimes had to read a sentence twice.