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by Artemis

schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The best thing about this fanfic is that Jack actually sounds like Jack, and that Will actually sounds like Will.
This is amazingly good. You're a great writer, Bonnie!
person Alex
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!!!!! don't stop!!! this is getting to good!!


Alex
person troublegirl
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Even hotter.
person Madoushi Clef
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*_* You're good. Write more Jack/Will slash, please?
person Sabishisa
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lovely~ Nothing better than a forceful Capitan Jack Sparrow ^__~
person Jayme
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was....HOT *melts* I love Will and Jack shagging.....
person z
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay!
yum!
yo ho ho
and a bottle of-- more please!

z
person Victoria
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story pleases me on several levels. First, I like to watch, so the whole idea of the characters putting on a show is a big turn-on. Second, I have a thing for brunette Geminis and Capricorns with great buns and Depp(Gemini) and Bloom(Capricorn) are my idea of a hot sandwicnd fnd finally, there's even a girl in it with them, right where I'd like to be, the cheese in the sandwich so to speak. All in all, it makes for a great story. Keep on writing and I'll sure keep reading.
person Adara
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a really amazing fic! Jack's idea was just so very Jack! :) I hope you write more J/W!
person D\'Artagnan
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please write more. The world needs more Jack/Will slash.