AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Intimacy

by Elisabeta

person Not Write Here
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I'm in absolute awe of this story. I thought it was well written and I LOVE the plot. And I completely agree about it not being twincest, but masterbation. It's so true, I swear!
person Teigra
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Delishious. I wonder if she will be back the next week to spend more time with them.
person Anon
schedule December 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
absolutely lovely...
person Arabwel
schedule June 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*drools* Man, this was great! I like this. I like it a lot. :D
person Drucilla
schedule June 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sick sick sick sick sick sick sick. I like the style... definitely disturbing subject matter, but not entirely out of character. The Twins did strike me as... rather sadistic. Not so sure about the Merovingian, seems like you wrote him a little more... oblivious than I would have written him. But still. Sadistic, and entertaining, and very well written, very in character. I like.