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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a great way to rape my childhood! I'm being serious too. (Scary, ain't it?) But, I agree with some of the people before me. Make it longer!
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September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hysterical!!!!!!!!
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August 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all, the classic story of Snow White was a fairy tale from the Brothers Grimm written during the late 1700's. The original was a frightful and greusome story like so many original fairy tales were. Secondly, this story comes off a bit ridiculous and without plot or point. I think you could do better with practice and research.
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you need a bit more detail but i liked it update soon.
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS GREAT!!! hi hoe hi hoe its off to work they go!!!
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was ok..kinda confusing...
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lmao. this was awesome. i loved it.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The fucking worst thing I've ever read. It's illiterate and horrible all together. It's not a story at all. AT ALL! Learn how to write and maybe you'll change my opinion. Yeah right.
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent, very erotic and super sexy, i loved it
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February 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is some dememted schnizzit! I love it! A masterstroke, ok show of hands, who besides me thought Prince Charming was a little disappointed on his wedding night? I mean all that cake and then no cherry? What a fucking rip off! (pun intended!) Please if youre going to dismentle Disney? Some humble suggestions on my part? Cinderella. 101 Dalmations.(can you write beastilaity? Not that i'm into animals, i just think it would be great payback for Ms, Deville!) Beauty and the beast? the lil mermaid? you get the idea. Loved the story! more!