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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey dude,
That was great!! But you could lengthen it up a little if you'd want to... She came just a little to soon. I know from people I write to that they want a lengthy story so that they can jerk off. I'm Dutch by the way so I can'nd ynd you a story I wrote... sorry, if you would want one. But I'll tell my friends about your story 'cause I think it's great! :D :P
That was great!! But you could lengthen it up a little if you'd want to... She came just a little to soon. I know from people I write to that they want a lengthy story so that they can jerk off. I'm Dutch by the way so I can'nd ynd you a story I wrote... sorry, if you would want one. But I'll tell my friends about your story 'cause I think it's great! :D :P
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An interesting take on a classical story. Fun, yet slightly strange. Most enjoyable all the way around.
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December 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
it was really really good, do a follow up chapter! look at how many hits you got!
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November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aaahhh! *faints* Oh my gods.....im seriously scared and scarred. lol
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*chokes on her lemonaid* Holy crow! That was horrible...funny at parts...but still horrible. You wouldn't happen to be a guy would you? It all happened to fast, you need to slow down and describe your sceens better. It's not just about the fucking, it's about the emotions as well.
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Holy fucking hell in a hand basket with seven hens! That was horrible *laughs* I agree with AJ, you need to take more time with your sceens, maybe you should look around here at the fics that have 5 stars on them and try mimicing your sceens after them.
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October 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* Uh...okay. XP
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October 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! I always knew it! Ha! I was proved right!! :D (Check out The Chronicles of Lucius by Fyrie--it's even mentioned in there about what was *really* going on in that cottage!)
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well that was a first .
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July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Needs more discription during the sex scean.