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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The plot sounds like a lot of fun. Overall the story is good, but could use a beta editor for grammar/spelling/formatting. The latter half of the fic was very sensual and I enjoyed the discriptions you presented.
~Dark Avenger
~Dark Avenger
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February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WoW!! I must have more that was awesome!!! I hope you update soon! ^__~
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
........um.............where is the rest of it?????
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE! Onegai? This is a great fic. Let me know if you plan to update. ne?
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was so good *already dead so can't die of anymore gacver ver loads* Oh well I like the story thus far- and I'm working on a Gackt story of my own... with me in it*points up to name* hee hee hee
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story and it'd be great to see a continuation, but not entirely nessicary. Only things that i can criticise is the NC-17 rating (I personally find it as a PG-13 or R at most) and the format (*i.e.* change to a new pharagraph when having a new character talk &/or new character preforms an action). just a couple helpful suggestions ^^. Please keep it up, we need more yummy bloody vampire jap hottie yaoi goodness!
~Arukas
~Arukas
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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gackt is sooo hot and u are a good writer!!! ^_^
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October 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Waaaahhh!!! Sugggoooiiiii!!!! I love this! It was really great. ^__^