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OMG!!! You MUST write a sequel, and SOON!!! The idea of Tavington and Benjamin is so hot!!!

Wow! This story is so great!!!!! O.O Amazing!!

Hello everyone who has been so kind to leave feedback! I have a feeling there's some I haven't been able to reach privately over the years, so I'll put this here like I just did on my other story and hope with crossed fingers that it will be seen by the right people ..... Thank you SO much for VERY kind words and wishes for a sequel. I have to admit that the story is old to me now, years past, and I feel I could make it smoother, fuller, and perhaps less stereotypical of fanfic plot devices if I tried my hand at it again. Unfortunately, I just haven't had the time to revisit it for such a major editing that it would take to bring it up to what I feel, personally, I'm better at in my writing now from experience than I was at doing it years ago. I roleplay now rather than write fan fiction. Not sure if this is allowed or not here (very sorry if not!), but if any ADULTS wants to reach me, has interest in writing with me or other adults in a roleplaying way with characters of fandom or their own original characters, I can be found at http://groups.yahoo.com/group/roleplayhaven .... Thank you again! - MaxG - female, just in case hasn't been clear and anyone has wondered :)

Hi, I liked your story. So angsty...and fresh:)

This marvelous piece has left me breathless and giddy. Please it's been almost 3 years, you must write a sequel! I will spread the word to all the slash lovers of this work and then you'll have no choice but to feed the mob! Excellent sexual tension you managed to keep me on the edge at all times. You are gifted! Ben and Tav were right in character and you tied up all loose ends well. So griping, I was breathing so hard I damn near had an orgasm. Maybe that was too much information, but it's that good. Please write a sequel!

This fic was fantastic - a few odd bits of dialogue and a few awkward sentences aside. The sexual imagery was simply stunning as was the dark tone. The tension was downright yummy!! I would love to read a sequel!

Oh my... that was quite... intresting. I'd like to see a sequel.

I dreamt about this story, and couldn't get it out of my head! MaxG, you have a tremendous talent for writing!

This was an outstanding fic! You've managed to make not only Tavington's survival but desire between he and Benjamin believeable. Bravo! That is something few writers could do and I'm in awe of your talent. More please!

L

I didn't know what to think, at first, with this pissing business - it seemed somewhat out of character, both Martin and Tav always struck me as men aspiring honour and dignity - but then it turned out a nice BDSM in the end. I liked it a lot. And, the ending absolutely REQUIRES a sequel.