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Wha? You ended it THERE? OMG! PLEASE update soon! I will go insane if you don't! Ok, maybe that's going a bit far, but I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter. Barbossa is SO in-character it's scary.

What can I say I suck at reviews but I know writers thrive on them so I'll try my best. Anyway away with the cliche start, I love the story, the concept is plausible tangent, I can see Will erm willing to make this sacrifice for Elizabeth and I thin you've keep him well in character through his constant defiance. I really like how you've managed to keep all characters in use and represented, right down to the monkey as well as put thought into keeping them in character. For some reason the captured pirates feigning sleep then eavesdropping amused the hell out of me, a nice mix of humor in a rather darker and more dramatic idea. Like the logic you gave Elizabeth in her thoughts on marriage to Norrington instead of Will aneageeagerly await the plotting of a rescue plan between her and Jack. Sorry I can't offer more beyond a great thanks for sharing your writing and ideas with the rest of us.

Thank you for updating. *grins* The last quote was brillient, I can just imagin the capt's evil smile... Poor Will, having to keep his end of the deal.... Hoping to have lot's of angst in the latter chapters, cos you know me. *angst lover* A fic with death, pain and destuction is defenity worth my time. please update soon wai waiting is causing me nastly head pains that has nothing to do with rum.
Rommie

I love this fic! I'll be counting down the 5 (or whenever) days 'till the next update. Really looking forward to more, and to find out what's gunna happen next. Keep up the FANTASTIC work!

Poor Will. That must have been so degrading. Good chapter.

YAY!!!!! Gods... it really IS torture waiting for so long for the next chapters, but I understand the need to take your time, especially if you have comp trouble. Still a very wee thought out plot. And don't worry, I don't think people really mind terribly if Beth an Jack have minimal parts. Don't get me wrong, I like Jack and all, but there's just something about Will ya know. You keep all of them well in charater you know. And I'd be one to tell you as well after seeing POTC seven times with another three still pending. I can now efficiantly quote the whole movie. I applaude you! For only writting for a few months, you do acceptionally well. Your fics aren't just mindless drivle... well, not in a bad way anyway. As for the e-mail, no I haven't gotten anything yet that I know of. I'll check again in a moment though. Thank you also foceptcepting to actually do something for my brithday. I can honestly say that I didn't expect you to accept that. I can't stay on too long, but do hurry and get the next chapter out ne? I'm DYING to get to the... action... part of it, savvy? And yeah, I use mostly Sindarin, but I like the quenya version of "farewell" much better. So until then, Heb maer, mellon nin. Namaarie.

~Celesta Hellewise Harman

Heehee, Will's thoughts did sound like Jack.

Still like it. :) And I'm still not liking Norrington...that asshole. :P Being mean to poor, adorable Jack.

-Aithilin

Where's ch 4? I've been waiting for it, checking every day...

I've just read all 3 chapters. They're good. I hope the fourth one we will finally get to will and barbossa. lol I'm glad someone is writing about Barbossa. He's my favorite character. Please write more. :-D

AHHH MAN! It was too short. need more soon, please!