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Poor Jack. ;) Can't wait for the next part. So please update as soon as you can.

-Aithilin

This is such a good story¡K it has grabbed my attention since the first chapter, and it is only getting better! You truly are a very talented writer. Besides writing my favorite LOTR story (BTW, are you still going to finish OOTSOTW? I certainly hope so! It¡¦s been so long since you last updated!), now you¡¦ve given me my favorite POTC story! Keep up the great job!

Hiya! My name is Ami! Melanie (Gemini2002M or/and GeminiFrk02) recommended your stories to me (She loves your writing so much! And I can see why!) And alls I can is is that I'm so glad she did! I absolutely LOVE your writing! This fic is just...wow! You write out the characters personalities to perfection! And I can see every scene that you write so clearly in my head! That just shows great writing to PERFECTION! You just HAVE to update soon! And I eagerly await more! The plot rox! lol Thanx again! Ciao hon!

.:*Ami, proud member of the ORS-Orli Rapers Society*:.

May I justsay you are very evl?

LOL! *mock glares at computer.* Yeah! Stupid computer! *laughs again then starts drooling* pain.... next chapter.... *gurgles like homer* Is very good! Screaming inlater chapters is goodgood too. Muuuuccccchhhhhh goodgoooooooddddssss!!! You really must hurry with the next chapter ne?! Is sheer torture waiting for it to come out now! Especially since you gave me that juicy little tidbit there. You know though... I do have a few male friends that write and love yaoi/slash it's a very good thing. They're not that bad looking either. And only ONE of SIX is not strait! *lmao* I think that's great! Well, yes, once e-mail is up and going, I'd love to talk with you, but for now, this is spiffy to. Well, have fun writting the next chapter! Oh! And never be afriad to do lots of stuff with blood or public displays! So many of my friends are squeemish of that sort of thing. Well, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Do hurry ne?! I may be going out of line by asking this, but do you think you could do something a little special if you have time? Perhaps as a birthday thing? My birthday is on the 1st of august. You know what.... never mind. That is too bold isn't it? Well, Nan annan lle ar im govad ad. Namaarie. ((Ah, elvish... I love being fluent... it means, "Until we meet again. Farewell.))

~Celesta Hellewise Harman

Wonderful! I really liked the way you showed Anamaria's point of view when Will was returned. It was a good decision. I really like her character, however small in the movie, and I'm glad you are giving her a bit of your time. When I got to the part with Elizabeth and Jack, I was crushed to learn that Will's dreadful bargain was now a one-sided profit for Barbossa. And Elizabeth doesn't even love him! Ah well, all the more angst and turmoil.. yay. I also liked Jack's intro here, even though he wasn't the focus really, I can't wait to see what plans you have for him later in the story. As for having to wait a bit longer for the other characters to learn the worst part of Will's deal, I will gladly wait! I would hate to see this story be rushed through. You are weaving a very interesting and perplexing tale. This is one of the best 'pirates' stories I have come by thus far. Bravo

Another amazing chapter. I'm greatly injoying this, so please update soon. I worship Angst fic's, as well as write them.... But I'm still at fanfic net at present. Have to start moving over here..... *Bring on the rum induced dreams*

Rommie

YAY!!! *does booty dance* You just made my cloudy Monday morning a bright sunny day!!! Thank ye!! ;) I liked this chapter, too. I am eagerly wondering what ill fate will befall Jack now, since he 'lied' to the Commodore. Good stuff... as always I love the way you pace the story. It flows so easily. :) It's funny, but I feel like I am reading the deleted scenes from the movie. The stuff that happened in between... very nifty, I must say. ;) *laughs*

The floppy disk was the problem?? Ouch... :( I hate when that happens... b/c I had something similiar happen to me with a very big file. Like the floppy disk wouldn't bring up the file... it would take FOREVER. I was really worried, but I came to work and the floppy disk worked. Hmmm... strange. Anyways... thanks soo sooooo sooo moo much for liking my stories. :) It's really great to know that someone is reading those two stories. *laughs*

Thanks again and I can't wait for more on this wonderful story!!!! :)

Ch 3 was good. I'm glad that the Will/Jack relationship will be one of love.

I absolutely love what you're doing with this story!

If Norrington is a bit miffed that the Pearl isn't at... er... that island (sorry, can't remember how to spell it's name) I don't even want to think about how irked Barbossa will be to find Jack and Elizabeth off the island! Or would that make his deal with Will null and void? But... Will just wanted Elizabeth off the island.. which she is.. I'm giving myself a headache!

Update soon please!