rate_review Reviews

*takes in a huge gulp of air to say everything i one breath* OMGODDES!! I loved it! I hope you'll get to some Jack/will angst soon! How long are we going to wait!!! The wait will KILL ME

Hullo!

Well, not to go all stupid on you or anything, but SQUEE! Uh, you see, I really love this pairing, the main one that is. I'm one of few people I know that has a thing for Barbossa, so you're my hero. I love them all, they're so beautifully characterized and such! I'll stop cheerleading and let you keep up your story! Dandy job!

TinyExecutioner

Great story!!!! I was so excited when I saw it was updated, and was not disappointed. You are a wonderful writer, I can just see all of the scenes playing out in my head. I like the 'Will in Trouble plot'. I mean, how can Jack comfort him if he hasn't suffered? I can't wait to read whatever you have coming up in the next chapters. Keep up the great work!!!

Leah

I REALLY like this story so far. I know the pariring is odd but it works. In a non-con kind of way of course. I have to admit watching the movie this idea (or something along the lines of it) also popped into my head. I mean with all the YUMMY Will gagging, and Will chaining and Will caging and the bending him over the box bit roowrll *licks lips* and that one pirate guy who kept caressing him and nuzzlin him when the chik was walkin the plank, I mean come on!! lol. (And I CAN'T be the only person who saw that either!) ANYWAY! lol, what I'm trying to say is this story is coming out wonderful! I love the idea and the charactorizations are great. I can't wait to see 'more' *wink wink, nudge nudge* if you get my meanin'. hehe ^_^ And I'm curious as to how your gonna get Jack into all this. Great story so far and I can't wait to see what your gonna do that sexy little thing next! ^_______________^ Keep up the great work! Ta!
~~ Adanhen (Manchild)

After reading your first two chapters’ I have found myself drawn into your fictional world. This fic is amazing, and so is its originality. The pairing's made me stumble at first, however after reading the banta between Will and Barbossa, and the hatred Turner feels towards him, I’m pretty certain on the motives behind the pairing... (Will’s love for Elizabeth) But then again, the pairing of Will and Jack... I love them together... Is this a true pairing, a reaove ove you’ relationship...? Or will the Turner/Barbossa become a true loving relationship. So many questions,’ which you’ve probably already answered. *Giggling on the after effects of Jacks Rum*

Please update soon...

Rommie

I just wanted to leave a little message saying that i love it and can't wait for you to put up more. It's getting really interesting

Chp. 2: Please update soon, this is so good!

how could you leave it there I mean come on I am dieing to know what you are going to do. You have to update quickly. Any way I am going to stop sounding desperate here. If you aren't busy could you email me when you update cause I want to be sure I don't miss it

I LOVE IT!! CAN I BRIBE YOU TO POST MORE SOOOOOON!

LOL! I know what you mean! I was grinning the rest of the day just for that as well. FINALLY!!! Someone who enjoys non-con as much as I do! Not to mention who is a VERY talented writter! It's always good when hot guys... like Will... scream. *sighs dreamily* Anyway! Once again an excelent chapter! I like that added part of being the crews cabin boy as well. OOoooooo!!! It just makes my thoughts full of creamy goodness!!!! You know.... you are an evil, evil woman/man (though I have a feeling it's woman) for keeping me waiting that long to read this part! I've been checking back every day.... and now... you've done it again!!!! I can't wait till it gets to the really, REALLY good stufffferffering and agony is always a pleasure. I like your writing style really. It's such that it pulls you in and makes you foregt your surrounding for a time. For some C&C... you might think about being a little more descrie ofe of the characters and the physicalities of it. The descriptions of the situations are WONDERFUL though. Honestly, I truly can't complain, even about the physicalities. I'd like to actually talk to you sometime, off the board. Drop me an e-mail if you're interested. As a fellow non-con, lover, i'd like to bounce some ideas off of you... if you're willing. You definitely have my admiration and my continued support and attention. Keep up the good work ne?! Oh... and do hurry with the next chapter ne? It truly is agony in the worst way, waiting so long for the next chapter to come out.