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More! Please! I know, we will soon see many, many, many of these. And I want to see this one. And all the others. Yes. Slash! Slash all the boys from the film. You know, I feel vaguely fangirlish at the moment. I've now seen it twice. Must see it again. *cough* Right. Your writing is quite good. I *love* your characterization of Barbossa. Brilliant. He's so... well.. you know. Yeah. ^_^;; Please continue this. *nods*

Good story so far. I'm already feeling sorry for Will.

that was great. i love it. can't wait for the rest. keep up the good work.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! You updated!!!!!! *runs around, flapping arms in the air like a crazy woman*

OMG!!! I am SO SO SO SO SO SO happy you updated and I am NOT disappointed AT ALL with this wonderful wonderful, seat gripping, nail biting chapter. It was excellent... you honestly have a true talent for making my skin crawl when it comes to your writing. :) I LOVE IT!!!!

Awww, I am sorry to hear that about your LOTR story... have you tried saving the story on a floppy disk? It helps tremendously when your computer doesn't want to work for you. ;) I am sure you're doing this already, but eh, just a suggestion. Hehe...

I also want to let you know that I WILL NEVER give up on you or your stories. They are too damn good to do something so idiotic as that. *hs* hs* And I truly mean it. There are many LOTR stories that I have given up on mainly b/c they are lacking in interest or just haven't been updated in ages.... but yours I ALWAYS check on. I have told ALL of my friends about your LOTR story and now I have something else to tell them about. This POTC story is a masterpiece in the making and thank you soo soo soo much for sharing and making my fantasy of Will Turner bondage come true. (Gah, when he was bound and gagged on screen, I wanted to jump the screen and hump him!!) Muhahahaha!!! ;)

I'm definately going to follow this. And I really can't wait to see how Jack is going to figure into it all. Please update again soon, I can't wait. :D

-Aithilin

Vey Nicel done. Yes I can see this actually happening. Hmm, yeah Barbossa does need a good shower to say the least before anything really happens. Poor Will, forced into a relation ship with the living dead. Hey sounds like my ex boyfriend! Sorry I just couldn't resist. I hope you get the chance to upload soon again for I loce this story. Oh and so you know you have passed a plot bunny onto me and it's teeth are very sharp. I promise I will not steal any part of your story willingly. But all writers know that a good story will influience someone else to write.

Jamie

This is not what I expected! Don't worry though, it's /better/ than I expected. I like how the terms of this "deal" was arranged by Barbossa and Will. After I read the first chapter, I just figured they would go to the Isle de Meurtes and then just betray Will, etc. But I love this turn of events! It flows nicely from that moment in the movie, just heading in a different direction now. It makes sense in a wonderfully dark and evil sort of way. I'm curious what will become of Jack too, since Will only included saving Elizabeth from the Island (if they are still there) in the terms. I wonder how Jack and Elizabeth would react to Will's deal as well.. so many possibilities!!! I can't wait to see where you take this! Will torment!! And you have no reason to be anxious about pleasing your readers. I also adore your LotR stories as well, and I know you will not dissapoint us. I was so thrilled to see you taking on a PotC story! Just write and be confident, you definitely have the skills and talent to be so!

I like the idea so far. I have to admit that I can't see the pairing really just yet. But I like you're writing style, I'm sure you can pull it off without a hitch. Very restresting. Hope you continue soon. :)

-Aithilin

This ery ery promising thus far. I cannot wait to see how this story expands and grows!

I like I like I like!

a very nice set-up for the rest of the story.

I'm curious why it seems like any character Orli plays is complared to a cat in a fic... just something weird I noticed.

Please update soon :)