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I am hoping that you will write an update to this story very soon, I am dying to know what happens to poor Will. If all those pirates take turns at him, he'll be dead. Poor guy, this has got to scar him forever. Man what a very bad situation to be in. I really liked the way you brought Will's realization into focus of exactly what he had agreed to. Sheer horror for him. I was really hoping that at least it might would have been somewhat enjoyable for the lad, but, it was more brutal and realistic the way you wrote it. I didn't like it at first, it was so so vivid and it horrified me for Will, like I felt all his panic and terror. So you did a damn fine job! Hurry up and post again.....

Tinewen

Oh that was wonderfully well written! I know I reviewed before but who gets tired of hearing their work rocks, eh? And yours does! Bravo my dear! It was quite good!!! Poor baby Will!

WHERE ARE YOU? Is your friend's father ok? Is your family ok?

I know it's just a fic, but it's weird that you haven't updated. It makes me think something's wrong.

Still good, keep it up!

Great fic but so sad wrtie mreo soon

oh, i cant believe you ended it there! its so good, please keep going!

When will we get more?

Hey Babe!

You haven't updated in a long time. I was just wandering what was up. Are you okay? Nothing happened to you or anything? Kinda worried here.

~Celesta Hellewise Harman

NO!! THERE MUST BE MORE!! please update soon--i need more. ::sob:: this is the first fanfiction i've EVER found that i've felt so strongely for i needed to print!! i adore this--everyone is so in character and it's absolutely beautifully written.....i love it. will you i don't think i can wait until the next update.....
i don't mean to feel so fanatical, but jack is my favorite character and yet i found myself skipping the parts with him in it so i could get back to will!!
::embraces NoTears:: thank you for this beautiful story!

Wow, I can't believed you updated! I've been following your story at FF.net, and was going out of my mine because you haven't updasincsince Ch.6. I was so happy when I stumbed on to this site, and saw chapter 7!! Yay!! You've made this girl very happy! Again, an excellent chapter, full of the Will angst that we all love so much. Hope to see the next part of the story soon! Oh, and perhaps you could go to FF.net and leave a note saying that you've already updated this story here? There are quite a few other readers who thought you haven't updated since chapter 6. I know they will be very happy to know that chapter 7 has since come out!

*sobs* Poor Will... it's funny, but I can actually kinda feel his fear. I guess that means you're a good writer~! :) Bwahaha... I love non-con. As long as it's fictional. Can't wait for the next chapter.