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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!! OMG! I'm so sorry that I haven't reviewed yet!!! I've been really out of it! Pain will do that to you. Been in the hospital really. I also can't stay on too long right now. I'm still in a lot of pain and the morphine is starting to kick in. I'll mail you some lat later and leave a better review. Just wanted to let you know that I'm still here. ^^ Namaarie!

~Celesta Hellewise Harman

Wow....Poor Will!! Excellent job and definitely worth the wait. Obviously they'll be wanting him when he's awake so I sense more torture in the coming chapters. I wonder how long before Elizabeth and Jack can get to him??

That last part you just pp, wp, was great! I've felt like I've been waiting forever for you to update! I'm glad you did.

Ohhh no... I can't believe your computer would keep doing that to you! If I have the money, I'd totally buy you a new one, just so that you could keep turning out great stories without having to re-do certain chapters every once in a while. But as I am quite broke... I guess I will just have to pray that your computer doesn't f**k up again in the future! I am glad that you won't be giving up this story, since I am totally addicted to it now. Even if you won't be able to update it as frequently as you'd like, but at least you will continue, and that's good enough for me. But what about your LOTR story thou? Sorry for keep pestering you about it, but I just really want to find out what happens next! I love your stories because you have a way of keeping the characters, well, in character, and for me that's extremely satisfying. I love the fact that even though Will is going through all those horrible tortures (and so is Legolas in your LOTR story, of course), he still seems to have his pride and dignity intact, even if they are just hanging by a thin thread. Personally, I love all the character-tortures as much as anyone else, but if the person being tortured gives in too easily, then I tend to lose interest. But your stories are great because of all the rich details that you put in, and the true reflections of the characters. Keep up the great job! You're obviously a very talented writer!

I almost fell over with joy when I saw this had been updated... Thank - you so much *look at my cheeky grin*
This was an extremly powerful chapter, will's pain was brillienty shown through both the flashbacks concerning his mothers death, and the Capt's violant act... I also found it very believeable compared to some of the other rape scenes I have read. You have done an amazing job so far, and are very tallented, I'm assuming you're in your teans cos your back at school, although I don't understand the American schooling system *if your from America?* I am addicted to this story, probebly even more so know, please update soon, although I know how hard it is to juggle both School and a social life, I have many unfinished fanfiction projects posted at fanfic net...

Looking forward until your next part...

Rommie

That was a very well written chapter, even with all the graphic violence. I hope Jack can save Will soon....poor guy.

Ahh, the much awaited chapter update. Awww, poor Willy!! (It's not as cruel as I thought it would be, but I can still understand the predicament that you were in.) I feel like such a pervert...can I give you a suggestion? Gang rape. That would be very cruel, and it just seems that that is what those pirates would do.
I hope I didn't make myself seem like an ass giving you suggestions. ;) Buh bye

While I do understand your predicament, I am eagerly awaiting the update. Awww, poor little Willy. :( :) We all have nasty minds, don't we? teeheehee

Hey! I kinda know what you feel like. I was having an extremely difficult time writing a big fight scene. Finally got it all done and my stupid computer deleted ALL OF IT! I was so upset, and I remember not really wanting to redo it or continue writing the story at all... So, this review is to encourage you because I know *I* needed it... You can do it!! Don't give up! Think of it as doing a huge edit, if it helps. As soon as you get past this chapter, it'll go easier! Just keep thinking of how much you wanted to write this story in the first place!
And on a final note, know this. You have an amazing talent for accurately capturing the characters, and I have every belief that you'll write a better chapter 7 then the original. Just keep pushing through this tough part!
I hope this little pep talk helped! Go write!! *G*

Hey babe! Sorry I haven't reviewed this part yet, even though it is only an AN. I haven't been able to get on the comp because of that damn virus that's going around, but I'm good to go now. Yeah, I know how it is not to be able to get to the damn e-mail. I alos know what it's like to have full chapters of fics erased. It's so damn annoying, cause you can never word it exactly the way that you had originally. Well take your time with it and just try to back the info up next time. That's really all you can do. I'm rooting for ya love.