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Hi! Loved the chapter. The part with Jack having to eat all that soup was brilliant. Poor guy. ;)

I got a plot bunny while I was reading this, just another to add to the pile. *kicks away several bunnies with PotC and wri written on them*. Poor Will, if you don't kill Barbossa soon, I'll do it myself!

My dad has cancer too, but it's not that bad apparen Tum Tumour removed and all that. Then there're all my medical problems....

Write more, please?! *hands a lolly*

-Aithilin

Aboslutely wonderful. Man I am so in love with this fic. I have to tell you that this fic inspired me to write a fic of my own. I'm loving all the torture you are putting Will through, and I can't wait to read more of it. I wonder if Jack and Elizabeth will rescue Will before Barbossa actually rapes him, but I kind of hope not lol. Ah, poor Will. Will-torture is great.

that was a good bit!

I liked how you got some of the movie lines into the bit where they got to the island (I can nevemembmember how to spell it's name..)

Liz sure does know how to pretend to be sick! Musta been easier then without thermometers (that is so spelled wrong..)

poor Jack, forced to eat all that food...

and now the curse is broked.. poor Will... and I hope someone gives him a band-aid soon, or else they won't have a cabin boy for long!

update soon please!

I am sick with a fever right now, but once I get better I will definitely come back and review. Just wanted to let you know I read it and enjoyed it immensely!!! :)

AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! GREAT CHAPTER!!!!! Now I REALLY can't wait for the next one! So, any new word on Melissa's father yet? I know what it's like to have cancer, only mine is brain cancer. It really bites, so I know some of what he's going through. My thoughts are with them botd I d I hope there's some absolution in this for them. But anyways, on with the review of the fic, I like the way that they cut Will's shoulder instead. I also liked your idea of Beth using the candle wax to make her head warm. I've done somthing like that, just not exactly the same. I also like how you thought out that Will would hit his head on the chest. Before you had even stated that, I was thinking of how he would fall like that. Very few people have the train of thought to think things through like that. I'm so glad that I found another person who does. Bravo babe. Bravo! BTW, don't worry if your e-mail screws up. Like I said before, it doesn't really matter the time frame that you get back to me with,it just matters that you do at some point in time. Once again, great chapter, I'm looking forward to more. BTW, have you read any of my fics yet? What do you think?

~Celesta Hellewise Harman

Hey, one can never tell what a story's going to be like from a summary (reading your notes on this chapter, ^.~). I know that I personally suck at them! But regardless, this story's really good, in my humble little opinion. Now, I'm a big slash fan, don't get me wrong, but a lot of slash/yaoi fics simply jump right into the sex without so much as a by-your-leave. Even if the slash is not likely to happen in reality in the most remote sense, I'd still like it to be a *little* more believeable than "they stared into each other's eyes and suddenly they had to have each other". Which brings us finally to the point... you have a plot! Yay! I really like it, too. It's also interesting that you made it a divergence, starting within the film. Unfortunately, since the movie's so short, fanfiction isn't given many opportunities to have a lot of diversification so far as plots are considered. *sigh* Ho-hum. But this is . An. And, eh, I don't really care if Will suffers. Actually, I like it when characters undergo a bit of torture. It can be great fun, ne? Muahahahaha! *cough choke* Lozenge! *fumbles blindly for one while coughing* Ahh, that's better. Anyway... uh, what was I saying...? Oh well. Tangent. I was kind of sad that Barbossa died in the movie... I quite often have a soft spot for villains. They're more interesting than the upright, morally sound characters. And he didn't even get to eat his apple... *sniff* Anyway, I look forward to reading more, whenever that might be. Take your time. Pressure makes for strangled plot bunnies! And... life crisis and all... Q.Q (teary eyes)

Very nice I can't wait for the next chapter.

Jamie Roberts

This is a great story; you're an amazing author! But take all the time you need. Your friends have to come first. I hope your friend's Dad will be all right.

No Tears - I'm a hospice nurse and I'd be glad to help your friends father in any way I can as a resource for information or whatever. I hope he is eligible for surgery. That is really the safest and best option.

Keep writing!

*shrugs* Do what you have to do, and go spend time with your friend. I'm sure we'll all still be here when you get back. I'll keep her dad in my prayers. See you in a day or two.