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So far, it isderfderful. I hope it isn't finished. havehave awesome storytelling skills.

I've commented over at LJ, but I'm checking every day for another chapter. I sincerely hope you're writing busily this weekend. I'm addicted.

First off I have to say I was pleasantly surprised when I read this fic. When you run into stories with the type of summary yours has, you are usually bombarded with nothing but smut. Smut which is more often then not poorly written. Your story actually has a decent plot, your characterizations aren't perfect, but they are good enough that it doesn't leave you cringing, and you know how to use proper spelling and grammar. At the very least you know how to use the checkers in your computer, another rare thing. You also use a bit of artistic license with your sentence structure that is a nice break and helps your story. Now that I have finished with my ramblings on the good things about your story, I have a few questions. Firstly, are you attempting to use accents or not? It seems that half the time you are trying to give the characters accents along with individual speech patterns and at other times it appears that you don't even bother. It gets rather odd at times, but then again I'm certifiable, so, whatever. Secondly, just as the movie you seem to very with your opinion on just what the pirates can 'feel.' What is your opinion on that particular topic? Thirdly, I beg you to please excuse this hopefully rare moment of indulgence...

YOUR FIC IS SO COOL!!!! AWESOME!!!! REALLY YUMMY YIPPEE!!!!!!!

Okay, just had to get that out. Really and truly, I think your fic has the opportunity to become one of the classics of this genre. You are an incredible author, plus you update. (I personally am a tad of a hypocrite on that one, but hey...) I don't review often, but every now and then I come across a gem of a story. Yours is one. There actually seems to be a point in reviewing. Hope to see your next update soon.

FB- on chapter 5: It's was a good chapter. Those bad pirates treating Will like that. What would be nice is if there was a scene where Barbossa was spanking Will for being a naughty cabin boy. lol :-D Can't wait till the curse is broken.

finally! I get to review! I read this last night, but my brother wanted the internet... annoying siblings.

alright, Liz and Jack are up to something, but why did she write the stuff backwards?

I feel bad for Ana, but she learned from her mistake and seems to have gotten over it, otherwise I doubt she would be a member of Jack's crew.

and poor Will! subjected to the meanie crew.. of course there are various bits in that where I would have made a snide comment and been killed on the spot, sometimes I'm glad I live in now!

now, let me think.. Ana at least knows soemthing else is up with the deal between WIll and Barbossa... could she even be thinking that it is what it is? And will they find out before Barbossa does whatever he's goina do to them? WHich is what btw?

and what happens when Jack finds out! oh the agony of not knowing!

please update soon!

I love Barbossa! Keep up the good work

While I find that 98% of all fan fiction on the internet is a pathetic and sad attempt at "creativity" involving the characters of others, yours is in the small minority. I have greatly enjoyed reading what you have written thus far. It is very believeable, well-worded and perhaps most importantly, your grammar and spelling are near-perfect. Three cheers! Nice work, I'd like to see some of your fully original writing.

*laughs* You're probably wondering why I am reviewing again, but I've been noticing something. You writwriting that the Governor's name is Weatherby... is that his first name that you made up for him? I was just wondering... :)

oh gawd...::falls over:: fuck...I'm speechless!!! It's a miracle! ::world is a better place all because Ami is speechless:: lol...omfg! This chap SO ROCKED! Dude, ask Mel, (I was on the phone with her while reading it) I was busting out laughing at the Jack scenes! I could SO see him singing that song and such, it cracked me up! And I was gasping and squealing with delight on Will's account muahaha! Oh gosh, I'm just so glad that you update so fast! ::grins:: Yeah, more then I can say bout me ::nervous laugh as she shies away from Mel:: Gosh this story SO ROCKS! ::skips away merrily::


.:*Ami: Proud member of the ORS-Orli Rapers Society*:.

*gasps* Oh dear... this was... wow. I am speechless. It sent shivers down my spine while I was reading this chapter. Oh, the torture!!! I LOVE IT!!! AHHH!!!! It was great to come to work, exhausted and feeling like 'poopie' and then finding out that you updated. *sigh* Lovely chapter again... loved every minute of it. The devious plans working up in Elizabeth's head, the tormenting of Will... oh geez. Just thinking about it gives me goosebumps. Hmmm... It'd be REALe toe to see this story made into a movie. Oh gawd... I'd be obsessed all over again!! *laughs*

Nicely done again. And I'll be sure to IM you sometime when I see you on. ;) Thanks for the praise on my stories, also. It means much to me! :) Keep up the excellent work and the rapid updates! (Wheeeeeeee!!!!) Can't wait for more! Like literally! *laughs* ;)

-anieanie