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for Stormy Waters

by NoTears

person Rommie
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more, more, more. to tired for longer review
person Erica
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
God, this story is so good. I look forward to your updates so much you wouldn't believe it! I have been a fan of yours and all dark fiction about the hottest male ever (I think you know who I'm talking about!) but I haven't written any. *sighs* I guess maybe its because I'm intimidated by your skill...damn you. Lol, I'm joking...sort of. You really are good, and I love your AIM 'Legolas Torturer' That's brilliant. But maybe I'll give it a shot after I see PoTC again. I only saw it once *starts crying* I know, I know, I ought to be ashamed of myself! Anyway, keep up the great work, and maybe we can talk sometime online!
person Aithilin
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! Poor Will though. Aww I j I just wanna hug him... But then Jack might get possessive and kill me.

Absolutely brilliant, especially with the backwards writing JackJack's reaction to it. Deffinately great. Can't wait to see what Elizabeth has planned.

-Aithilin
person Celesta Hellewise Harman
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL! Yeah... I have seen it again. We're on par mellon nin! 8 for 8! I just saw it again today. Can't stay on long, still at a friend's house you know. Just wanted to say... you are totaly right. Will is so good for the torture thing. God's it's hot here... Anyway, I really loved it when he asked them to stop. I love it when hot guys beg! ^^ Don't worry about getting back to me so soon. As long as you get back to me some time I'm spiffy. I know how very crappy it is when the comp decides to be a bitch. Well, keep it up ne? Namaarie mellon.

~Celesta Hellewise Harman
person Sandrine Black
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Does happy jig* YAY!!! New chapter! Eh, I don't care if this was late... it was freakin good! And a good length too, so no worries. Man, poor, poor Will. It's so sad what he has to go through.... I can't wait for more! ^_^ Yeah, I'm sick I know. But still. ^_^ Most definitely can't wait for more of this awesome fic. Keep up the /fantastic/ work!!

(Man I love this fic!! Have I mentioned that yet??? ^_~)

-Sandrine
person Korax
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic soo much. I like how your chaers ers react to the sotry and to eachother. I especially like the way you write Jack. KEep writing this please.

BTW, this is going to be Jack/Will is it not., I honestly can't tell anymore. ^^;; Still, amazing story!
person ghoulie
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's lovely!

You've got everyone in perfect character, bravo. I'm probably the only one in the world that loves Geoffrey Rush (yes, I drool about Cap'n Barbossa - go figure). I wish this was done in hetro style, but hey - it's done so well I'm not complaining.

Well done!
person Viviana
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I read part 4. I loved it!!!!!!!! Loved the part where Barbossa makes Will ask for the apples and call him captain. Genious. Please kep writing. Such a tease. lol thought something a little naughty would happen.
person Ami
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAA!!!! This chap SO ROCKED! ugh omg I loved it when Will was fighting against the pirates to get to Barbossa, and when Barbossa was feeding him the apple pieces (ok, so both those parts are practically the whole chap lol...it was AWESOME) I really do love your writing! Your detailingjustjust so...awesome! I could just see everything! It was so awesome! lol

And yay! I'm glad you like mine and Mel's story! I'm honored to have you read it! I think it is coming out really well! :D And me and Mel are really excited bout it...though now she is hanging on my ass bout it cause I need to send her my part ::giggles:: It's a back and forth kinda th..I ..I get on to her for not sending me more of Price of Fame, and she gets on to me for that! ::sigh:: It's fun though :D And now I've started a newer fic of him with some Orli torture of my own ::malic laugh:: Mel is my biggest suporter :D I wuff her so much! I'll be postin it on this site as soon as I finish a couple chaps...I like how it is coming out! :D

Well hon, thanx again for posting a new chap so soon! Please do it again! lol (maybe it wasn't that soon, but it was soon after I had just finished reading what you had written) lol Thanx again! And I'll ttyl! Ciao!


.:*Ami: proud member of the ORS-Orli Rapers Society*:.
person Melanie
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Haha... I was on the phone with Ami right when I saw your update here. I started squealing like that damn monkey!!!! *laughs* Gawd... I am sooo in love with this story, it's abolsutely positively my favorite. And I really mean that. I don't think there is an author out there that has affected me so like you have. I love that when I can actually feel the shivers up and down my spine... both from excitement and other emotions while Will is tormented so.

I LOVE IT!!!!! ;)

I need to IM you sometime so we can chat. :) Great job, as always. Like I said... this story is a masterpiece in the making. Thank you so much for creating it and sharing it with the world. I just want to hug you right now for writing it, it's so great! :) It's like my dream come true to see these kinds of stories... am I daft? I think so... *laughs* Anyways... lovely chapter.

Can't wait to read more!!! YAY!!!