rate_review Reviews

*waves* If I review in both places can I get two lollies? *teasing* But really. I do love this story, and want more, soon. I like the fact that you brought Bootstrap back, that was a cool twist on everything. *grin* I love the parrot. I want more of him too.

oOo..the suspense! Now, Boostrap wouldn't *really* put Will on trial, would he? Whatever happened to "Whatever makes you happy dear"? We need to send Anamaria down there to kick some puny stuck up butts. Yup, that oughta do it.

I love the whole public displays of affection thing you got going on between Jack/Will and the rest of the crew. It's so great, because Jack would be the one that's all "if they say something, they're dead", while Will is the one that really cares about what everyone thinks and doesn't want to make anyone uncomfortable. And Anamaria's comment! Oh, that had me laughing. "I just want the crew to keep their food down" (or something like that...hee hee) So funny. Right, so, great job and I can't wait to see what you update tomorrow!

*grins* Wow! What can I say! This is one of the best fics I have read! Hurry and update soon, the suspense is killing me!

ooooooo the cuteness the cuteeness!!!! ::cute spasm:: awwwwwwwwwwww Jack and WIlllllll are so cute together! more soon? ::holds out sugar;: i'll give you some sugar cubes...^_^

weee!

Will and Ana getting back at Jack for teaching the bird that song! what is the birds name? does anyone know?

oh! and thank you for answering my question about Bootstraps nickname, Il ike your theory, better then anything I could come up with!

what else... um um.. I had a question, but I forgot what it was *sigh*

I liked when Elizabeth smacked Bootstrap, that was loverly...

can't thinkanytanything else... um... yeah, that's it!

oh! thank you for updating so much!

we can't wait to hear the tale of how jack and bootstrap met. sounds like fun, we think
more, we plead for more Charlie and Bravo

For all of the chapters so far: very nicely done. I think that you've hit Will's characterization spot on. In my opinion, I think Jack should be a just a bit more manic, but then again, it has been a year after the movie and things have settled down a bit for the Cap'n. I'd also like to see firsthand more of the things that caused Jack's reputation as a formidable pirate (ex: like killing the guy who threw the dagger at Will). Basically, I'd like to see the darker side of Jack explored. The lighter side, i.e., all the cuddles with Will (which are extremely cute, and in my opinion, agree with my view of Jack's personality) is well done.
That's it from me. Basically, I really like the story so far, and can't wait to read the following chapters.
~FP

I really like this story. When I came on and saw it was updated I was excited. The way you write the characters is perfect and I love the fluff between Jack and Will. I also think that having Annamaria in the story I awesome, she was really cool in the movie and she's probably the only one who has the most guts out of the whole crew. Keep it up I can't wait till the next chapter! ^_^

More Gibbs! ^_^V I don't know why, but I just love him...

I like how you write Elizabeth, seems fitting to her character. And Jack's a continued work of excellence. ^_^

There interaction between Jack and Ana is great! Love it.

^_^V

This was a nice look at everyday life on the Black Pearl. I'm very interested in hearing the story of how Jack * Bootstrap met, since Jack seems to have a certain trepidation about telling it. And of course I want to see what Jack's "lesson" to Anamaria & Will is. ;o) I liked how you made the chapter very peaceful, but with an undercurrent of threat from Bootstrap and tension between certain crew membe..Go..Good job, as always! :)


Ps. I think Jack the Monkey should come back for a showdown with Cotton's parrot. I wonder which of them is the bigger pirate's-animal-sidekick badass......lol! ;oP