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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Elizabeth slapped Bootstrap! I just love that! And Anamaria continues to show her sass. I just love strong women characters. I hope to continue to see more of such. And thanks for wishing me luck on the writers block 'cause *tada* It's gone! My turn to give you lollies!
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lets ditch Ted Elliott and throw Aithilin into the writer's seat for the POTC sequel. ;) Now *there's* a movie. Aithilin, i love the characterization and the imagination in your plot. It's very well organized, presented..and hell, it just kicks ass.
Damn those sexy pirates.
Damn those sexy pirates.
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still liking this. Glad that you made the crew unshocked at Jack and Will. Very real. Curious to see what will happen with the reward floating around after them. I'd like to see more with Ana Marie-- she's a lot of fun. Any info you do talking about her past with Jack, seeing as she was the first to hear about Will, would be cool.
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
There is only one way I can think of that could make Jake take the bounty on thier heads sereusly. And thats when somebody goes after Will.
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I get a Lolly shapped like the jolly ole Roger! -sucks her lolli-
Yre sre so kind to me, mand I get to cull, maim, and perform Aztecian sacrifices with flamers! Youre the best.
One lil comment on what you told me luv. If you think Will can keep Jack out of trouble you're forgetting something. He's Captain Spa Sparrow. His keeping out of trouble would be....it's....It's like imagining NOrrington as a pirate or a stripper. Not likely. -.- Those mental piccies were eeeeeeeeeeevil. -shivers-
-sucks her lolly- This was short but I am impressed on how you manaaged to depict the Pearl's relationshiup with other pirates. At teh begining you can see the pure awe and the hint of fear in the eyes of the old pirates in the cell next to Jack at the mear mention of the l. l. YOu can't forget about those two silly old soldiers who argued whether or not the Pearl existed. Lovely. You managed tp incorperate that without making a mockery of neither pirates or the Pearl.
Oh yes another thing. Bootstrap Bill subject again. You've made him not. You don't savvy so lemme rephrase than. You didn't make him like Jack. You didn't make him like Will. YOu didn't make hiom like Norrington. You made him William "Bootstrap Bill" Turner, his own person, with his own personality, and his own stick up his arse. -sucks lolli-
You're the shibbiest, wickedest, most savvyest writer I know, savvy?
Nita!
P.S. -sucks lolli- More Parrot please.
I get a Lolly shapped like the jolly ole Roger! -sucks her lolli-
Yre sre so kind to me, mand I get to cull, maim, and perform Aztecian sacrifices with flamers! Youre the best.
One lil comment on what you told me luv. If you think Will can keep Jack out of trouble you're forgetting something. He's Captain Spa Sparrow. His keeping out of trouble would be....it's....It's like imagining NOrrington as a pirate or a stripper. Not likely. -.- Those mental piccies were eeeeeeeeeeevil. -shivers-
-sucks her lolly- This was short but I am impressed on how you manaaged to depict the Pearl's relationshiup with other pirates. At teh begining you can see the pure awe and the hint of fear in the eyes of the old pirates in the cell next to Jack at the mear mention of the l. l. YOu can't forget about those two silly old soldiers who argued whether or not the Pearl existed. Lovely. You managed tp incorperate that without making a mockery of neither pirates or the Pearl.
Oh yes another thing. Bootstrap Bill subject again. You've made him not. You don't savvy so lemme rephrase than. You didn't make him like Jack. You didn't make him like Will. YOu didn't make hiom like Norrington. You made him William "Bootstrap Bill" Turner, his own person, with his own personality, and his own stick up his arse. -sucks lolli-
You're the shibbiest, wickedest, most savvyest writer I know, savvy?
Nita!
P.S. -sucks lolli- More Parrot please.
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wonderful!!! love the pairing btw......hehehe definitly love this story!!! do continue....
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like, write more ;) jk
I love your writing style and I love way way you write Jack. As you said yourself, he's not an easy character (in my humble opinion, if any other actor played him, the movie wouldn't have worked quite as well) And wow, you're a fast bunny, not that it's bad or anyhting...all I know is that I can't get enough of the story.
Oh and please pretty please...could I have a lurve scene? I'll bribe you with cookies ;)
-Paige
I love your writing style and I love way way you write Jack. As you said yourself, he's not an easy character (in my humble opinion, if any other actor played him, the movie wouldn't have worked quite as well) And wow, you're a fast bunny, not that it's bad or anyhting...all I know is that I can't get enough of the story.
Oh and please pretty please...could I have a lurve scene? I'll bribe you with cookies ;)
-Paige
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't WAIT until Jack and Bootstrap meet up again......*that* should be interesting!
This was another great chapter.....Keep up the good work! :)
This was another great chapter.....Keep up the good work! :)
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know, cute is not an adjective one usually applies to the likes of pirates, but in this case, ahem, "Awwww, Jack and Will are so *cute*!"
Ok, that's over with. In specific regards to the story (so far, at least ~_^)
1)Someone (I honestly forget who, just someone who wasn't me) once said that there are 2 types of people who write stories, these being
"Writers" and "storytellers." I think you definately fall into the latter category (a good thing, in my opinion.) I am loving this story, mostly
for the care taken in the details which bring the story to life. Good job there.
2) Thank you for your attention to several writing tradis, is, including:
a) paragraphs-- ah, how many times have I looked at a story only to find it a block of words without end. Sadly, these stories might be
great, an I miss them because I immediately hit the "back button."
b)Spelling -- More than closely resembles the English Language. In fact, is usually correct. What a pleasant change from some other authors.
While I understand that English is hard enough for native speakers, and harder for those learning it later in life, one should always make sure they
have the right word to avoid confusion. Thank you for not relying on SpellCheck to do your work for you.
c) Grammar-- Even I suck at grammar, but thank you for having verb-subject agreement, and consistency of tense. Stories flow so much
better when one isn't constantly tripping over the sentences.
although you may not think these things very important, the fact is that by not noticing any problems with them, I am left free to
enjoy your (excellent) story. And I thought I should express my appreciation.
Other than that, the rest of my $0.02:
Chapters end where they will. Long or short. I see no need for you to apologize. Of course we want more (we're greedy bastards),
but I say better a good short chapter than a sucky long one. Kind of like a performance or visiting-- leave them wanting more, not
stuck wanting out.
Keep up the good work, don't forget to slip the ginseng into Jack's rum, and above all, keep having fun.
^_^
Ok, that's over with. In specific regards to the story (so far, at least ~_^)
1)Someone (I honestly forget who, just someone who wasn't me) once said that there are 2 types of people who write stories, these being
"Writers" and "storytellers." I think you definately fall into the latter category (a good thing, in my opinion.) I am loving this story, mostly
for the care taken in the details which bring the story to life. Good job there.
2) Thank you for your attention to several writing tradis, is, including:
a) paragraphs-- ah, how many times have I looked at a story only to find it a block of words without end. Sadly, these stories might be
great, an I miss them because I immediately hit the "back button."
b)Spelling -- More than closely resembles the English Language. In fact, is usually correct. What a pleasant change from some other authors.
While I understand that English is hard enough for native speakers, and harder for those learning it later in life, one should always make sure they
have the right word to avoid confusion. Thank you for not relying on SpellCheck to do your work for you.
c) Grammar-- Even I suck at grammar, but thank you for having verb-subject agreement, and consistency of tense. Stories flow so much
better when one isn't constantly tripping over the sentences.
although you may not think these things very important, the fact is that by not noticing any problems with them, I am left free to
enjoy your (excellent) story. And I thought I should express my appreciation.
Other than that, the rest of my $0.02:
Chapters end where they will. Long or short. I see no need for you to apologize. Of course we want more (we're greedy bastards),
but I say better a good short chapter than a sucky long one. Kind of like a performance or visiting-- leave them wanting more, not
stuck wanting out.
Keep up the good work, don't forget to slip the ginseng into Jack's rum, and above all, keep having fun.
^_^
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another good one. Geez, I'm running out of things to say... I hate to leave one-liners...
Ooh, ooh, two lines, now. ^_- Seriously though, nice characterization of all involved, I especially like Norrognton, he seems so... like him. ^^ And I agree, Elizabeth and Norrington do seem to have more chemistry. Anyhow, Jack was nice as well, liked the reward bit^_-
Great again! ^_^
Ooh, ooh, two lines, now. ^_- Seriously though, nice characterization of all involved, I especially like Norrognton, he seems so... like him. ^^ And I agree, Elizabeth and Norrington do seem to have more chemistry. Anyhow, Jack was nice as well, liked the reward bit^_-
Great again! ^_^