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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just love this fic. It was like the first one I ever read after seeing the movie. And it's still my fav! ^_^ I don't really have any suggestions for you, cause I really like how everythings going. Can't wait to see what happens next! And if any of the reviewers get you down at ff.net, have Jack (the monkey) attack them. I feel bad, because I spend most of my time at ff.net; I don't want others giving it a bad name! Just have fun writing this fic! Keep up the FANTASTIC work!!
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh. A price on their heads? Does that count foeryoeryone on the Black Pearl? Oh god I hope that they dont screw themselves with this. I would hate to see things turn out badly. Don't worry if the chapter was short, its still really good and suspenseful. Everyone gets writers block ( I've had it for a few months, I mean geez!). And thanks for the lolly! Much apreciated. Good luck!
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love seeing all the romance stuff going on between Jack and Will. If you do have the Black Pearl being taken by Will father, pleace don't make it easy for him. Also if this does go angst, then pleace let Jack and Will die together, I don't think eather one could live very long without the other.
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
~*Chapter 11*~
Grrr....bad bad Bootstrap. How dare he go to *Norrington*?! Well, even with all that, I really liked this chapter. Plots are getting more complicated and all that and yeah, sorry for making this review short, but you posted chapter 12 also and I have to go read it now. No patience left in me right now!
Grrr....bad bad Bootstrap. How dare he go to *Norrington*?! Well, even with all that, I really liked this chapter. Plots are getting more complicated and all that and yeah, sorry for making this review short, but you posted chapter 12 also and I have to go read it now. No patience left in me right now!
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*needs to read what happened after the "knees bit Badly, I would... ... this IS good. I like this... :D
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this story very much so far. I love how you make Jack change acing ing to who he's interacting with, the way he does in the movie. I especially love how you didn't reduce Elizabeth into the bitchy ex-girlfriend or shove her completely out of the picture. She IS a good character, and it says a lot for your ability to be able to incorporate her in a way that conributes to the story. The whole Booap/Jap/Jack conflict is great too, especially because it's put Will in such a nasty prediciment. I can't wait to see more of this story!!!! :)
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
we like this story. We can soo see it happening. So a Will/Jack Shipper. I(and my evil sister) totally enjoy your writing style. keep the chapters coming, and we'll keep reading them!
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is my favorite story right now, and i really appreciate how quickly you update, i imagine it\robarobably not the easiest thing to do. i look forward to your next few chapters, and do you think you might be able to put a little bit of smut in there? i don't think you would have any problems writing it because you write so well! great story i really enjoy it.
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
-hugs-
Wait...
-pout-
Fine then, I'll stop threatening your reviews. You did the thing with Anamaria! Yay!!!!!! That's what I love about Jack. A gunn wont make him talk, a jail cell won't make him talk, chain won't make him talk, being hanged work make him talk, getting slapped by Anamaria again, wilAnamAnamaria is the shizzle. Jack is so sweet and darling while being himself, You manage to capture Jack as three dimensional, savvy?
Wait,lemme explain that better, rather than just create a character you created a person with words. You took the man who boasted and swaggered and waved his hand like a queer from soho, and turned him into a human being, as complex as any normal person walking down the street only more so 'cause he's Captain Jack Sparrow! You show how he shows everypone a diffrent version of himself, being the kind sweet wooing type man near Will, a good friend with Anamaria, the devilish trickster when their on the job, you even show the true essence inside of him that makes him more than just any old pirate, a glorious Cin oin of his own Pirate Ship.
And you got the "A Pirates life for me" in one of the chapters. Your great.
Will is having a bad effect on Jack in a way, you can practically watch Jack become slightly more domesticated when he's around Will, and you can see Will being a bit more submissive and relaxed because he's finally come to terms with his pirate blood and is doing what he loves best.
You may feel that you made Bootstrap a bit too Norrintony in that chapter but remember, even if he is a buckaneer, he has been hired by a high class man who has expectations. is eis expected to be a complete military gentleman with his new boss because it was the way one delt business way back then so, you got him right. You are getting a real knack for making characters complex and realistic.
Waitin' for the next chapter!
-hugs-
Nita!
-hides shotgun behind back-
Wait...
-pout-
Fine then, I'll stop threatening your reviews. You did the thing with Anamaria! Yay!!!!!! That's what I love about Jack. A gunn wont make him talk, a jail cell won't make him talk, chain won't make him talk, being hanged work make him talk, getting slapped by Anamaria again, wilAnamAnamaria is the shizzle. Jack is so sweet and darling while being himself, You manage to capture Jack as three dimensional, savvy?
Wait,lemme explain that better, rather than just create a character you created a person with words. You took the man who boasted and swaggered and waved his hand like a queer from soho, and turned him into a human being, as complex as any normal person walking down the street only more so 'cause he's Captain Jack Sparrow! You show how he shows everypone a diffrent version of himself, being the kind sweet wooing type man near Will, a good friend with Anamaria, the devilish trickster when their on the job, you even show the true essence inside of him that makes him more than just any old pirate, a glorious Cin oin of his own Pirate Ship.
And you got the "A Pirates life for me" in one of the chapters. Your great.
Will is having a bad effect on Jack in a way, you can practically watch Jack become slightly more domesticated when he's around Will, and you can see Will being a bit more submissive and relaxed because he's finally come to terms with his pirate blood and is doing what he loves best.
You may feel that you made Bootstrap a bit too Norrintony in that chapter but remember, even if he is a buckaneer, he has been hired by a high class man who has expectations. is eis expected to be a complete military gentleman with his new boss because it was the way one delt business way back then so, you got him right. You are getting a real knack for making characters complex and realistic.
Waitin' for the next chapter!
-hugs-
Nita!
-hides shotgun behind back-
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July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I REALY love how this story is coming along! (er, *wince* no pun intended.. lol) Very original! ^_^ I love your charactorizations and the quirks. The humor is just adorable. I have a constant smile on my face when reading it and I enjoy that. ^_^ Will and Jack just fit so nicely together aye? lol Like I said I LOVE your portrail of Will and Jack, and I love (again no pun intended) how Jack keeps callin Wil "Luv", its how I always picure them so its just cute, and fits well. I admit Bootstrap isn't quite how I imagined him, but then again I kinda imagined him half dead, lol, but I like how he's coming out though. I can't wait to see what he's going to do about Jack 'corrupting' his sweet little William. ^____^ Anyway, Keep up the great work! I can't wait for more! ~ Adanhen (manchild)