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I have to say, this is fantastic! The characters are dead on, and I love what how you are creating Bootstrap. The romance is so, just, WOW! Even your grammer and spelling are imaculate. Please write more of this as soon as you can. If the other readers are anything like me, you have a huge crowd of people on the edge of their seats waiting for the next bit. You are an artist!! Just make sure you keep including cute moments between Jack and Will, and I will do your bidding. =^.^=

ack! please say it wasnt bootstrap who saw. I dont want jack to be castrated. i like jacks parts right where there are! anyway, once again you have managed to come up with a most amazing cliffhanger. i will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter and praying for jacks um... parts. ^ ^
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*Gasp* No hot, sweat, monkey luvin? Where's the smuty sex? This is AdultFanFiction ya know!

Just teasing. I did like this chapter, though maybe when you edit later you'll add in some hot slash? (As in sex, not sword play. Erm...never mind.) Please, please!!

And I would have expected Bootstrap to have barged in the moment he heard or saw Jack fooling around with Will. I know, I know I'm full of way to many questions and/or opinions. You see what happens when I really like a fic? You've got me hooked.

BTW I'm finally going to get to see POTC again tomorrow. *Jumps up and down* Yes!!

wow, you really did mean a few minutes. impressive. yay, jack isnt castratbut but will is sad... you have to make him feel better! i dont know how but thats why you are the cool author and i just read! he he. well, definately a good job with the major conflict. but what will go wrong next, i wonder....

Good chapter. Bootstrap was pissed. At least Will and Jack didn't crumble under the pressure. I hope there is a sequel to PotC.

Nice... I like this. That confriontation was a bit abrupt in my opinion, I think that if you do edit you might want to stretch it out a little.... but otherwise, I like. I like this a lot. :D

that was cool. love it. can't wait for the rest.

Ooh, dundundun. ^_^

Very well done, once again. I'm glad you didn't get mushy with the Bootstrap and Will interaction. Kept them both well in character. ^_^V Well... as much as a character as Bootstrap is, anyway. You kept him pirate-y through the fatherly stuff, yay!

...And now I'm excitedly waiting for the next part!

^_^

YA! Another chapter. Actually now i'm drinkin_Jack_Sparrow on that site. Yahoo's been actin' up. Wouldnt let me log in under experiment_no_666. ^.^ great fic. Hoping for more soon. Like tomorrow. If you dont update i'll track you down, savvy?

Oh wow!!! I have missed so much of your fic. I'm still busy cleaning up and me mom will be here tomorrow (Saturday). I love all that you have written so far on those chapters and the more I read, the more I feel of the Capt. Jack Sparrow's presence. YOu did good girl, keeping it very true to the movie. So happy that they finally kissed. One word though, it supposed to be "Rotan" meaning rattan or cane in Bahasa Melayu. Those were the times when the British India Company were busy sailing across the sea and ocean to trade. A lot of history in pirates stuff. I too do not have luck with FF.net at all. This is so sad. Anyway, I love whatever you have written and Jack Sparrow and Will Turner even Anamaria presences could be felt whenever I read their character. There, this is one of the longest review I've ever written. Sorry to miss out so much on this fic. I can't seem to find the time to read anymore not to mention, write. Keep those chapters coming and hopefully I will be able to chat with you tonight.