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wow you write fast, that's really impressive! I love your writing style too, and how everyone is in character.
Hoping for more Jack/Will soon, you write that well too.

'Tis a savvy story I be tellin ye.

lol I can't wait for more I really hope you'll post more asap. I want to know Bill's reaction. *snickers*

Oh! I liked that last bit! YUMMY! *cackles* More? Soon?

Earen
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I bet Bootstrap was outside the room. He is probably still trying to take Will away. Good chapter.

i retract my previous comment about cliffhangers being evil. cliffhangers are cool, especially when the story is updated so often os yours (which is very greatly appreciated by the way). And you still manage to keep everyone in character (much more than i could ever say for myself). And your plot twists are supurb, things i never would have thought of. but one thing i am a bit curious of, will you be writing of jack and bootstraps past together? how were they friends and such, ya know, some backstory. well, good luck on future writings (although you dont seem to need it)

-hugs-

I call shot gun on being the favorite reviewer! And No. 1 fan!

Boostrap is cool, his determination ee hee his son shows just how much Will is like his father. That should help you with who Boostrap is. To quote whathie, \e, "e's a splittin' image o' Bootstrap Bil' come back t' 'aunt us" Saying that lovely ol Bootstrap is physically an older version of will with a beard. o.o Oooh, shibby mental picture, Will with a beard. -drool-

Anyways....(lol) you're gut instict rocks. Bootstrap was a good man so he in character musta been very similar to Will with a lil of Jack's version of honesty, truth, and honor. Now that he's a changed man.... he's still the original version of Will only, more like Norrington, savvy?

Cool! I gave you an idea what to do! Please put that in, it's too funny for words, just Jacks face is enough to send me into a fit of giggles and scare everyone nearby me. The short amout of fluffy would be perfect. Will is more of a romantic Jac Jack in a ways but something tells me Jack is more than capable of wooing some one. Also the words, "You aren't going to be a eunic much long if you stay around me, love" come to mind. You musn't forget Jack's admant belief Will was a eunic during the length of Pirates.

You are right, Anamaria is the coolest! I loved the way she got to slap Jack twice! Thats double the pain for Jack and double to fun for Anamaria! And she got the Intercepter out of it even if they did loose it to Norrington's troops. Anamaria should get in a few words here in there when ever something comes out sexist among non-crew members. She seems to have known Jack a long time. How else would he know it would be far worse not to have her in his crew after loosing her ship in Port Royal.

Is it me, or are my reviews long? Eh, I guess it's both. I don't blame you for the hugs and kittens -hugs and kittens right back- Kittens are okay. Although I'd like to see what would happen if someone gave Jack a black cat for his birthday -giggles-

I have a vivid imagination and spare tihilehile on shore. Oh, if you need any help with Sailor's knowledge, I'm here to help! :D. I'm in a good mood from the hugs, kittens, and Will/Jack action.

Gods, I just realized, Will hasn't seen his dad in years, why didnt his dad look for him when he was 'released' from Cap'n Barbie's crew? That's going to be an awkward conversation.

-hugs and swords- ((I like sharp pointy weapons))
Nita!

Good chapter. I, of course, loved the brief interlude between Will and Jack. I hope Bill doesn't try to take Will away. That would be bad.

Very nice again! I really like the interaction between Bootsrap and Jack.y'ry're friends... but not tooo friedly. Yeah, that made sense. -_- Oi! It's a rock but not too rocky! But you know what I mean? Tension; love that. And what's going to happen when Bootstrap learns of Jack/Will? ^_^V

And the Jack/Will moments. Mm! Lovely.

...And AnaMarie. Very nice bit of comic relief there with that one. ^_^

Your writting brilliance continues to amaze and awe me! ^_^V

do have a life? Sorry rude question, but I can't help noticing how fast you update. Not that I don't love it mind you, but it's a little unusual...and very much appreciated by all those who are following this fic as avidly as I am.
I hope Will doesn't end up killing his father.

Well tha's just lovely. I was wonderin' when 'is dad would find out. Gonna go see PotC again today. Cant seem to get Jack's accent out o' me head. Lovely chapter. Cant wait for another one. Is his day gonna stay fhe whe whole show?