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As for plot suggestion, hw about someone else taking an interest in Will? A Jealious Jack is alwas delicious! More! More!

Hey did you stay to watch that last scene? After the credits at the end of the movie? The one with the monkey Jack taking a coin of the treasure? You could possibly weave that in somehow...I'm sure you're wonderous brilliance could find a way.
How about Will making the Black Pearl a new type of cannons, much lighter, with a much longer range? A sort of secret weapon incase they ever need it. Just a thought.
Please continue soon!

I love this story!

almost as funny as the movie *bg*

I especially love the bit at the beginning when Will said Elizabeth's corset drove her crazy, great stuff!

I was reading it at work (at ff.net) and got weird looks while I was giggling, but it's so good!

and you managed to throw in a bit of history! So I'm learning as I read! YAY!

Good chapter. I like the way you are working on Will's and Jack's relationship.

that was amazing. can't wait for the rest.

I like this... I like this a lot. Okay, so I have yet to see the movie, but what can I say? I often read fic before getting to know the real thing. :D Now, I'd definitely like to tell you that this is excellent. Are you, by any chance, that Aithilin who wrote the excellent Sauron/Legolas fic? If so, I hope this will be half as good, making this incredible. :)

I was thrilled to find a third chapter up. I'm also thrilled that your gonna bulid up a plot (with angst no less), and not just do random sex scenes. Can't wait.

Nice! I likey! Personally, I don't see Bootstrap as a kind man, walking out on his kid son, but very good!

It's wonderful to have someone who can write this fanfiction so well. You must be experienced in other fandoms. It was a pleasure to read your fiction because saddly, half the fics in this section are quite bad or out of character. You are doing quite well and you have the characters perfected. Will would seem the type to grow closer to Anamawho who certainly isn't afraid to hit her captain hard and rapeatedly and he did seem to become friends with Mr. Gibbs. Now, it is amazing that you would include historical facts and the like. If you have any questions of the movie or any quotes from the movie just ask me. I am not ashamed to admit I have seen it once every day since its been out. I had to stop today though from lack of money. God I wish I had Jack's riches. Well, ahyways, this email aint about me. It's about you. YOu are an amazing author and certainly seem to know your facts about pirates. I make but one request, could you put in a pun with the parrot in it? I really like that Parrot, dunno why. Oh wait, yes i do, he did his business on a red coat. go Parrot! -hugs-! Don't stop writting, I'll be waiting faithfully for the next chapter.

Good story.