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by Aithilin

person Akurei(too lazy to login)
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good ending. I liked it. I can't wait for the AU.
person Datiye
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A special thanks! Don't know what I did to deserve it but, yay! That was a great ending. It was happy and Jack didn't die. And that evil Elizabeth is still holding out, haha. Gotta love that girl. Well, I will be looking out for your new fanfiction so expect more reveiws. See ya then! Good luck!
person Sandrine Black
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh sadness... it's all done now. Oooo, time for AU!!! *blushes* Sorry, I've been pretty much obsessed with it since you mentioned the idea. So be expecting more reviews for when that comes out! I'll be looking out for your next fic, keep up the /fantastic/ work!!!

-Sandrine
person Insane Pineapple from Naboo
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Did you put up two chapters at once? It certainly seems like it. Oh, it almost looks as if our dear Bootstrap will be joining the Black Pearl. It's ending already? Wow, my stories usually take months to write. Well, I do have band camp and practice going on, so maybe you updated twice this morning? Jack had better know what he's doing; he's going to leave poor Will on his own otherwise. I like how you have Elizabeth plotting in the background and Bootstrap going along with Jack's plan. Is this really going to end in a few chapters. It's been awhile since I've been sad that story ended. All the others had sequels that are still be written. So, what is the next going to be about that you needed information on a WWII site? Oh, SINGAPORE! Now, that rings a bell....

Ja ne,
~Insane Pineapple from Naboo

person SandrineBlack
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man oh man, I got to read two new chapters today! That's what I get for leaving my house for socializing in the outside world, and taking my eyes off the computer. Very pleasent surprise. I'm all excited for this fic to end, so the AU will get here... but then again, I'm all sad, cause I don't want this to end. Mixed feelings here! Rargh. Either way I'm excited for anything you write I guess. So definitely looking forward to more of your fics. Keep up the /excellent/ work!!!
person soho
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This isn't sadistic.... this is *torture*!!! MORE!! NOW DANGIT! lol...GAH! I absolutely adore this, and it is beautifully written, keep it up!
person Earen
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'd ne'er forget you, luv. :) What lovely chapters. I'm also said that this be cloo eno ending.
I can't wait to see what Jack has up his sleeve, as it were. Ah! Simply lovely.
Btw, an offer, if you will: I'd love to archive this story at Savvy :)
http://evolutionsX.net/savvy/ :)

Earen
person ShadowSpirit
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man o.O You're quick at updating. ::Prods Bootstraps character.:: Least he's getting better....finally seems to understand the two....goodie ^^ ::Can't wait to read more.:: I think you should make a sequel after this *nods* that you should.
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Finally got me an account! :))

-huggles-

Im going to hoard these lolli's!

Heh, just wanted to mention something, you never DID get a diffrent title! hee hee

Okay, it's your turn to review me! :P

Nita!
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DAMNIT! FUCKING SITE!~!!!!!

20 minutes. 20 GODDAMNED MINUTES WRITTING YOU THE SHIBBIEST AND SAVVIEST REVIEW AND THE GOD DAMN SITE DIDN"T POST IT CAUSE IT WAS DOWN!

-breathes-

Okay, I'm fine now.

Except for that whole monkey/horse bite. (Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong story)

very cool chappies, now, make sure at some point jack gets slapped, im thrilled however, about the fact that elizabeth went all slappy and that Bootstraps being manipulated.

I always did wonder if the dog stole the keys or if he was the key keeper. What happens if the dog looses said keys? Oo

Two chapters only! -sigh- By the code of teh brethren Morgan and Bartholomew, i request a sequel. Seeing as I wrote the code, i can request it. :)

Okay, loved the slave idea. Especially if you put the word S-E-X in front of slave. Some one -glares at sisiter- deleted your email before i gotta chance to reply.

-hugs-

-sucks lolli's-

Nita!