rate_review Reviews

Wow. I love this story! I hope they both live through it. I also hope that Bill and his son get along better and come to some kinda understanding. I love how this story is written. Nice clean concise chapters. Not to long or rambling, like yours truly. But perfect. They grab your intrest and hold it and keep you hanging on for the next installment. I added this fic to my recs for easy acess lmao. Hope you don't mind! One day I hope to as good a writer as you are. :) Can't wait for the update!!! Keep it coming and i'll keep reading. Not to mention Orli and Johnny are hot, hot, hot, hot in this movie! I love picturing them as you describe them in your fic! All cuddly and comfortable....*sighs* Nice......*goes back to re read and imagining.* Update soon please?

I like how manipulative Elizabeth is, it's not like she had any choice in marrying Norrington, she might as well make the best of it. *g*

"Not now dear, I'm worried about my friends having a bounty upon their heads."
"Well, to hell with law and politics and respectibility, I've been hard up since your father stopped paying me 'visits' once we became engaged. They're free to go, now drop those bloomers."

*cough* I just had to get that out there...I swear Norrington and the Govenor are probably closer in age, anyway and Swan is such an effeminate wuss. LOL

Still loving the story BTW.

=^.~= Aly

this is such a spiffy story smut isn't even neccessary! excellent job, i really can't wait to see what happens next!

I liked Elizabeth a lot in this chapter. Good chapter.

-sigh-

I'm not going to hurt you. I'm normally an angst writer so I would be the first to congratulate you if you killed off one of the boys.

Yes, this was verort.ort. Far too short for my liking.

Longer review later since theres not much to cheer right now.

-gives Talking Dolly Jack and Talking Dolly Will-

Cheers!
Nita!

Next chappie gunna be longer? Elizabeth,
hehehe... thats just too smart... is she still
in luv w/ will? hope not. So, is this fic gunna
be real long? I just wanna know so i can prepare
myself!
Well,
must be going!
Jade

I thought I'd help ya out, just to be nice. http://au.geocities.com/digger_history_ww2/ http://www.abc.net.au/changi/history/default.htm
Email me if you need anymore. I like the way that you're showing Anamaria's doubt in Jack's plans, but at the same time showing how loyal and trusting she is to Jack. I wonder what will happen when Elizabeth meets with Jack and Will. "It would have never worked between us, Darling." *grins*

Ja ne,
~Insane Pineapple from Naboo
P.S. I hope I was helpful for once....

Yay, new chapter! Can't wait to see if there's any trouble when there in the town/village. Hopefully there will be! ^_~ Anywho, I need to go eat the breakfast of champions.... ICE CREAM! Hehhe. Can't wait for more of this awesome fic, keep up the FANTASTIC work!!!

WHAT?!

IM AT AN OUTRAGE! YOU HAVEN'T DECIDED YET?!
You are supposed to be evil! To tease us with your knowledge of who will die! Not disappear after telling your favorrevireviwer you know not of whom to kill! I vote for Gibbs or Cotton. No matter what teh parrot lives. more will come after i read Chap 19.

Oh, this chappie was blissful! I lovedthat line, "J you you're a pirate"

Hee hee hee! it had me giggling for ages! or ratehr not ages, but it made me forget my rage.

One of my prophesy's appear to be a 'comming true so yay!

Jack beign threatened is a site that amuses me.

Jack is the one getting hurt this time, isn't he? Will's had his turn and Bill is still pissed at Jack and WIll is prolly going to do soemthing stupid. -sigh-

I just hope they remember the Code: Rule 25. DOn't get caugth without ammunition.

I hope Jack get's through this fic alright, after all, he is Captain Jack Sparrow and he has too many fangirls. Will could get hurt himself this time and it turns a bit silly with will being caught in the jail cell and Jack beign the one to tease Will about getting caugth and stuck there.

More Parrot as always -sucks lolli-
Nita!