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by Aithilin

person Pookie
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! it's starting to get exciting!

well.. it was exciting before, but now it's.. *sigh* y'all know what I mean.

Bootstrap fustrates me, why can't he accept his sons decisions?! He is lucky he is a ficitonal character, otherwise I would slap him silly.

now, what is Elizabeth up GoinGoina withhold the honeymoon til Norrington does what she wants? btw, what is Norrington's first name?

"I'm not insane. That's how it seems though."

I love that, I think I'll be using it in one of my many signatures *bg*

more soon please!!
person Jade
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehehe, I luv your Jack, He is like the Jack-Jack,
does that make sense? I would luv it if he used
that sexy slur on everyone, of course he would
have to use luv in every sentence...
must get going!
Jade
person Datiye
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
what a devious way for ana and will to get back at jack. behaving! who woula thought...
person Mel
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^_^ Repeat of last review's adjective, because really, "glorious" goes a ways, don't you think?

Glorious!

^_^ Very likable Elizabeth -- great job with that! I've noticed most author's tend to make her evil incarnate...

Hmm... Waiting for more! ^_^V
person Sandrine Black
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay new chapter! I would have reviewed sooner, but I was out... seeing the movie again!!!!! ^_^ YAY! Yeah, that was good times... Anywho! Good chapter. Wondering what's gunna happen in Port Royal, can't wait to see. Let's say it all together: "Sleep is good. Sleep is our friend. Slee is FUN!" ^_^ Oh yeah, I also sit pretty much all day and go between refreshing and reading from three diff sites. A yahoo one that has like 800 members, lot of good fics there! Fanfic.net, and then here. ... That might mean I have no life, but I'm enjoying it still! hehehe. I would also help ya bounce off ideas for that new AU fic, but I don't want to turn into a yes man, er..woman.., like I'm afraid I might just cause I'm so excited about it. Also, I like to not take part in fics, cause then everyth suc such a surprise for you! I'm a avid reader, no writing is done by me!

Looking forward to more work done by you!
Sandrine ^_^
person D\'Artagnan
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Please update soon! And this IS one of the best PotC fics I've ever read, I kid you not. Don't be so hard on yourself. I like where this is going *grins* That Bootstrap is so evil.
person Sandrine Black
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn, another chapter so soon? I'm most definitely impressed! Poor Ana, birdy drove her mad. Hahha... I know I would be! No sleep in 2 days? Why ever not? Hopefully it's a good reason, not a one.one. Cause there are instances where no sleep is cause by something good, rather than bad. Like being up on the 'puter? ^_^

I'm really hoping to go see the movie again tomorrow.. err.. that's now today I mean. I mean to see it tonight with some friends... I'm just hoping they don't back out on me. I already told her I would hunt her down if she didn't call me. I wonder if she knows I was serious about that.... ^_^

Anywho, I'm definitely looking forward to more, but don't forget the whole sleeping thing! Hahaha... I'm also getting really excited about that AU your talking about. While I was waiting for new PotC fics to pop up (I have no life, what can I say.) I was really thinking about it, and it sounds so sweet!

... Leaving now, befo tal talk your ear off. Keep up the FANTASTIC work!!! (Sleep I say, sleep!)

-Sandrine
person Nita
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Darnede ofe of cousins and ficwriters. Me and Kat are writting 24/7 to type out all46 chapters of The Piraes Code so you'll see little from me

I wish I could give you roses and pirates merchaindise so cyber roses and cyber tshirt will do instead. -sends-

-hug-

You give me pirates, you give me evil schemes, what more could a devoted fan want? You even gave me parrot. I hope the plot is going to take a fascinating turn, i really do. You have my full support all the way Exhaustausted,
Nita!
person Mel
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Found a new adjective to use -- glorious!

So - The parts with Will and Ana are simply glorious. ^_^ Mmhm!

As is everything else. I love it. Thank you for writing this!

^_^V
person Madoushi Clef
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fluffy? That angst, the whole Bootstrap escapade, and... having to remember Norrington exsisted was fluffly? *gets her hamster and Sanji plushie* I'll need these.

SHORT chapters, but I think they shouldda kept up their revenge a bit longer, just to drive Jack to the wall. ~_^ So he'd be all freaked out and paranoid, telling them, "Aye, aye! Got back ta normal!" Or maybe they should have written another song to teach the parrot....?

Thank you for answering. *feels special* 'M not surprised that Bootstrap kept changing his ...'opinon' so as to keep alive. His last name says it all. (And William means 'protector', by the way.) The last chapter was a little choppy, but it needed those quick cuts to the important points of everyone's conversation (or thoughts), so it's alright, but it still feels choppy.

Loved the, "Absolutely nothin, Jack." Will said, the very picture of innocence. Don't think he's the tyo roo roll his eyes though. Maybe a hard stare, and, "Do it, Jack." With the implication of it'll be more trouble than it's worth if he doesn't.

'Tis off.

Clef