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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I luv this story!
Very Original, Who is gunna capture W & J?
I think it would be interesting if you ended the
story in a way no one would suspect, like Bootstrap
shooting at Jack & Will taking the bullet,
Of course then Jack kills Bootstrap &
Gets captured/trialed by Norrington
and almost hung... BUT
Elizabeth saves him w/ Anamarie
then Jack goes off into the sunset
missing Will, but holding him on a
pedestal, forever comparing his
Lovers to Will... *sigh*
OR jack gets hanged, and dies w/
his last thoughts of Will.
Ok, as you can see, I have tons
of plot bunnies but NO writing
talent that doesnt go w/ poetry!
:( Well,
Off to bed!
Jade
Very Original, Who is gunna capture W & J?
I think it would be interesting if you ended the
story in a way no one would suspect, like Bootstrap
shooting at Jack & Will taking the bullet,
Of course then Jack kills Bootstrap &
Gets captured/trialed by Norrington
and almost hung... BUT
Elizabeth saves him w/ Anamarie
then Jack goes off into the sunset
missing Will, but holding him on a
pedestal, forever comparing his
Lovers to Will... *sigh*
OR jack gets hanged, and dies w/
his last thoughts of Will.
Ok, as you can see, I have tons
of plot bunnies but NO writing
talent that doesnt go w/ poetry!
:( Well,
Off to bed!
Jade
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A 150 cookies coming right up ;) Thanks for that bit, lady, I needed that ;)
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I'm so glad to see another chapter. I'm also glad that I made you smile, it's only fair afterall. Considering how much I grin, or at least get /lots/ of enjoyment out of this fic your writing. I'm sad that you're not continueing this at ff.net, but oh well. I understand how things are, and I'm appreciative that you're still writing this! Looking forward to the next chapter, can't wait to see what Jack's gunna do. Keep up the FANTASTIC , an, and sick jack the moneky on any evil reviews!
-Sandrine
-Sandrine
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this fic. I love how you didn't completely destroy Norrington or Elizabeth's characters for the sake of plot, as some writers have already done. I really liked their characters in the movie, and I like your portrayal of them.
LOL...I really love Jack and Will's relationship. Jack's revenge for Will's game is going to be *very* interesting. ~_^ I wonder what you are going to do about Bootstrap, though. Are he and his son going to be reunited in the end? That particular part of the part seems to be heading for angst, indeed. But since I am a strange person who enjoys angst, 'tis quite all right. ^_^
I hope you update soon!
LOL...I really love Jack and Will's relationship. Jack's revenge for Will's game is going to be *very* interesting. ~_^ I wonder what you are going to do about Bootstrap, though. Are he and his son going to be reunited in the end? That particular part of the part seems to be heading for angst, indeed. But since I am a strange person who enjoys angst, 'tis quite all right. ^_^
I hope you update soon!
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm... What could they be planning? Well, I guess I'll have to wait until the next chapter 'cause you got me stumped. You definatly have me curious, but that's just signs of a really good story. I'm anxiously awaiting your next chapter. Have fun writing!
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Weee! I get mentioned!
Why chocolate chip only of course ;) maybe with a hint of cinnamon and milk! But only if you’re good.
So what’s the history with Jack and Bootstrap? All the teasing…I can’t take it ;)
Why chocolate chip only of course ;) maybe with a hint of cinnamon and milk! But only if you’re good.
So what’s the history with Jack and Bootstrap? All the teasing…I can’t take it ;)
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Leading to something is always good! ^_^V And thanks for getting Gibbs in there! ^_^! I'm not sure why I like him, I just do...
As always (and to be expected^_-) very fine work. Love how you write AnaMaria... think I said something akin to that last time, b sti still do. ^_^ Superb!
^_^V
As always (and to be expected^_-) very fine work. Love how you write AnaMaria... think I said something akin to that last time, b sti still do. ^_^ Superb!
^_^V
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Actually, you had the perfect amopunt of parrot in this. Enogh so that he pisses off will and still isn't hated by the reviewers.
On the Norrington note, let us never speak of that again.
Me, i published me first ficcy here with my cousin. we wrote The Pirates Code together. Silly lil thing but it makes me happy.
Anamaria...gosh...how many times can I say how much I adore her? She is so wonderful the way you pull her off in that slight tom boyish, captains best friend, anti sexism woman. YOu kept Elizabeth all cool and Mr. Swan all doting fatherly. She's pretty savvy but he parrot is still the saviest. Yes, i think its a word, if noshrushrugs- creative liscence.
It's early when im typing so i haven't much tim but lemme say Elizabeths slap was so...utterly Elizabeth. You can tell she would want to hit someone unless she was really mad or they hit first. Bootstrap is on his way to being just as realistic as everyone one else.
Oh, and the crates of rum? Nice touch.
Love -sucks lolli-
Nita!
PS I'll try my best on ff.net, alright?
On the Norrington note, let us never speak of that again.
Me, i published me first ficcy here with my cousin. we wrote The Pirates Code together. Silly lil thing but it makes me happy.
Anamaria...gosh...how many times can I say how much I adore her? She is so wonderful the way you pull her off in that slight tom boyish, captains best friend, anti sexism woman. YOu kept Elizabeth all cool and Mr. Swan all doting fatherly. She's pretty savvy but he parrot is still the saviest. Yes, i think its a word, if noshrushrugs- creative liscence.
It's early when im typing so i haven't much tim but lemme say Elizabeths slap was so...utterly Elizabeth. You can tell she would want to hit someone unless she was really mad or they hit first. Bootstrap is on his way to being just as realistic as everyone one else.
Oh, and the crates of rum? Nice touch.
Love -sucks lolli-
Nita!
PS I'll try my best on ff.net, alright?
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*laughs so hard she cries*
that was fabulous!
I think at some point, the crew might end up with roasted parrot for dinner!
oh! I did think of the other thing I wanted to comment on, it wasn't a question, anywho, I'm happy that Jack and WIll aren't trying to hide their relationship from the crew. Although I imagine on a boat... ship... thatld bld be hard to do anyways.
thanks again for updating so much!
that was fabulous!
I think at some point, the crew might end up with roasted parrot for dinner!
oh! I did think of the other thing I wanted to comment on, it wasn't a question, anywho, I'm happy that Jack and WIll aren't trying to hide their relationship from the crew. Although I imagine on a boat... ship... thatld bld be hard to do anyways.
thanks again for updating so much!
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July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awww no smut? oh well the story is great without it, but anyways how exactly did bootstrap meat jack, i hope they weren't in the same type of relationship that jack and will have cuz that's just weird... great story and am eagerly awaiting more