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by Jen

person la lola
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
are you planing on updating soon? i've been waiting for weeks but you havent! =( so sad!
person Karna
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Being naked and bound was going to be a serious hindrance to effective communication

hilllllarious!
person tri
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked that. the chapter was short but, over all it was good. e-mail me when you get the new chapter up.

care
tri
person Lightwing
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
So, other people were piqued by that little comment as well, eh? The only part of Jack's personality you seem to be missing is the word 'savvy' being used in every other sentence. My compliments on a well written story.
person MadoushiClef
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Gah! Poor Jack! *huggles her Captain* Don'na worry, Will'll make it all bett



*glare* Right?

~Clef

(Translation: Write more.)
person Aryah
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I felt you did quite well about Jack's char in the non-con bit, and I belive you're right the screaming and suc pro protest would have been to much, considering who the victim was... keep up the good work and if Jack(*sigh*) shoulf have any emotional trama the loverly Will(again*sigh*) should help him resolve, it wouldn't be to c'leshay.
Much luv,
Aryah.
person Mel
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! ^_^ Doesn't matter too much that it's short (though longer would be nice.... ^_-) I liked it. The rumrunner seems evil... great^_^ And I like how you describe Jack. ^_^V

More updates! I love this story ^^
person eternal
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was splendid! You did a fine Jack. Saw POTC July 20 and Johnny Depp was great as was Orlando Bloom. I would love to read a Jack/Will fic.
person YaoiKaiba
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I just want to say with tears in my eyes and a great big hug...thank you for writing a POTC yaoi story. I didn't think anyone would write one...considering some people are evil and don't like gay stories. T.T But they're the best out of het stuff! I would have written my own, but I'm working on an Inuyasha story right now and then I'm going on toward Treasure Planet. Don't ask why I would write yaoi for a kid's show...but James Hawkins is absolutely adorable...including if Silver had a cute son to go with. In either case...*kisses your feet* I'm not worthy! Lol

~YaoiKaiba
person D\'Artagnan
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jack being raped is really delicious.