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for Under the Caribbean Moon

by ThePhantomSockPuppet

person Cami
schedule August 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YES! Thank God it's not another slash fic! ::does happy dance:: Hehe he fell asleep...that's great ^____^ God, I dun think Elizabeth should have done that to Will but then again I don't blame her...::imagines Jack:: *sluuuuuurp* lol jp ;) Is this just a PWP or will you be posting more...?
person Dark_BubbleGum
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh Oh Oh!
You have sooooo got to continue. Why haven't you updated yet?
Please update!
person Atalaya
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic so far... hm... little jack... Elizibeth can keep little jack, can I have big Jack? hehe

Please continue!
person silver fox
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh, how wonderful!!!! please, please continue!!! ces histoirs sont si bons...

merci pour la lecture si amusant,
fox
person Pixie
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you are correct about a chemise being a type of undergarment. Back then they didn't have bras, and the corset was just being introduced to some parts of the world, if you remember from the movie the corset was new to Elizabeth. But back to the chemise, it was used as a night-gown, and a women's type of undershirt, for lack of a better word.

And to comment on your story, I must say that I was amazed that you kept to the old-fashioned lingo. I was quite impressed, and I must tell you that I approve of your creativity, for comming up with the idea of Will being an eunuch. very clever indeed! I hope to read some more of your work soon.
person claylover18
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it...are you gonna be updating soon?
person Bob
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Het hurts my eyes... >.<

It was well-written, for a PWP. My only complaint is that if Jack wanted to take Elizabeth, and Elizabeth was willing, I doubt he'd care about her and Will at all. He's a pirate, not a saint.

Bring on the slash!

And no little Jacks o.o Everything gets screwed when there are babies...
person Bob
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Het hurts my eyes... x.x

It was well-written, for a PWP. My only complaint is that if Jack wanted to take Elizabeth, and Elizabeth was willing, I doubt he'd care about her and Will at all. He's a pirate, not a saint.

Bring on the slash!

And no little Jacks o.o Everything gets screwed when there are babies...
person Nina
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Elizabeth is just a disgusting whore.
person Jenn
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It was great! Keep going...