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person Anon
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting story. I look forward to seeing how it resolves.
I'm surprised the governor wasn't more upset about knowing Will and Elizabeth already consumated their relationship. Back then I believe fornication was actually a crime. And Will seems like the type who would marry her just to be proper. But it's still interesting and I'm enjoying it.
person Carmella
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
heehheheheheh man could you please get more of it up? I am laghing to hard to beg!
person metalmayhem
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
excellent!!!!!!!! this sounds like it would make a perfect sequel... i have this feeling that Raven and Elizabeth might get along both having some what similar backgrounds
person Mrs.Sparrow
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmm....Raven. Do you know swift? I've read a story with Raven ,Swift and Becca in it before on fanfiction.net.

Anyway I love this story! It is so good! Please update soon!