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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I would like to hear more. Please sir, (or ma'am) I want some more.
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that... is cruel...
you are an evil author, giving us just a bit then hanging the rest in front of us! meanie!!
but your tactics to get reviews seems to work, what did Barbossa do to Will? Why are WIll and Jack with Barbossa in the first place?
more soon, please?
you are an evil author, giving us just a bit then hanging the rest in front of us! meanie!!
but your tactics to get reviews seems to work, what did Barbossa do to Will? Why are WIll and Jack with Barbossa in the first place?
more soon, please?
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Looks interesting. If you continue, I'll follow it. :) I'd love to know how it got to that point.
-Aithilin
-Aithilin
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great Job!!I think your pretty good at this!:)Todd liked it too, ya have to write more!
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... very interesting. :) Wish it was a longer chapter, but I do like it so far. Keep them coming! :)
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I really do. But I have one problem....
The pirates are cursed... they can't enjoy the pleasures of orgasms or or or food or even the touch of human flesh. Is it just that Barbossa is pretending that he feels it and such? I dunno... *shrugs* But other than that lil' mistake, it's a good story. Do keep going... I will continue to read it. :)
The pirates are cursed... they can't enjoy the pleasures of orgasms or or or food or even the touch of human flesh. Is it just that Barbossa is pretending that he feels it and such? I dunno... *shrugs* But other than that lil' mistake, it's a good story. Do keep going... I will continue to read it. :)
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
....need... more.... NOW! >:D
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Throwing Barbossa into the Jack/Will mix is a great idea. I can't wait to see how they react to his...um..."advances", and what effect it has on their relationship. Your use of imagery is lovely as well. I hope you update this soon! I'll be looking forward to it. :)
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more. I'm not really a fan of darkfics but I really like this one. Add another chapter soon!
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Is a nice little reviewer*
Non-con is always a good thing. And I *adore* the imagery with the apple and its juices. Made me want to squee.
This chapter is quite short, I certainly hope there ire ere explicit material on the way? Hee. I'd pretend I'm not a
depraved individual, but everyone would know I was lyin'. Though, I suppose even if it does not get graphic it's going to
get quite angsty. So that could be good too. :)
Non-con is always a good thing. And I *adore* the imagery with the apple and its juices. Made me want to squee.
This chapter is quite short, I certainly hope there ire ere explicit material on the way? Hee. I'd pretend I'm not a
depraved individual, but everyone would know I was lyin'. Though, I suppose even if it does not get graphic it's going to
get quite angsty. So that could be good too. :)