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i liked this chappie, altho it was 2 short! plz write more as soon as real life interfere's not. i kno wut that's like, having a story and not getting time to work on it b/c life as we live it is crazy. i liked how you had barbossa ask waht he thought will would sound like, moaning, whimpering, screaming, call me sick or perverted, but i liked that part.

write more plz!!

I know how pesky thateal eal life" thing can be. I hope everything's going ok for you.

I was quite shocked by developments in this chapter. You managed to fit a lot in a short space. Jack's previous relationship with Bootstrap, Barbossa's pre-execution torture....Maybe you could delve a bit into Barbossa's past and the reason he does the things he does (if he actually has any reasons!).

I'm both looking forward to and dreading the next chapter, seeing what Barbossa does to Jack and how he captures Will....You always manage to keep me guessing and anxious for more of this story! Please update soon! :)

Chapter six was good. I feel sorry for Jack.

I love it keep going, looking forward to Will's introduction.... (second introduction? You know what I mean)

Great story I can´t whait for more

Very very viscious!!! Leaving me with just this....::glances at amount on page:: While this is one of the darkest stories I've read in awhile, I'm very curious to see how you end it :-) I hope real life isn't interfering in bad ways, and that it stops soon.

It's getting good!It's 2:30am and i thought i would catch up:),keep writing!!Maybe i should sleep now,lol

Please continue the Jack pain. It was sooo good. Love the way you make Barbossa soooo evil. lol :-D Keep up the good writing.

now thats what i call refreshing! after 2rs ors of looking on the internet for barbossa action and only turning up plenty of mary-sues and some sweet sappy
w/j hapeningadinading this story is such a releif! its incredibly twisted and nasty and just how i like it! mmmm i cannot wait for the next part....more jack torture would
be my preferrence but it would be just as nice to add a little will into the mix... i only demand one thing : MORE!

Hey-lo! I just read your story! ONE OF THE BEST FANFIC EVER!!!! No lie... I am like, in love with Captain Barbossa (despits evs evilness) and I think that you managed to cpature his stunning *so-called evillness* in this story! I also love Jack, so I can fell somehwat bad for him... But I honestly think you should keep up the Jack pain for a little while longer. Then maybe Jack could start planning a daring escape, and blah blah blah. Your the author, I'm merely ateempting to express my opinion! Well, on other things... I just wanted to let you know that your story is awesome, and I am awaiting the next chapter. PLZ HURRY! lol. Best of luck to ye!
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