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Jack pain! Continue Jack pain! Need Jack pain!

Keep it on Jack for a little! Please? Btw, this is a really great story ^.~ Good goin.

yeah for an update!, *and backstory* Somethings make more sense now::grins:: Darn Barbossa for coming back. More soon, hopefully more J/W, maybe????... =)

I love your work but as the unofficial cool pirates fic reviewer, i must say, i will hang you with your intestines if you do not coutinue. Ofcourse, only doing that after I boil your eyes out with a heated brand and whipping you with a cat o nine, savvy?

-stares-

Okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay, no more studying 17th century torture styles.

Amazing clarity in overall Barbosa Asshole ness. or is it Arsehole. Still haven't firgured out the proper dexterity for those words in the english dilect.

-shrugs-

Beautiful work and I must insist you to countinue this story if you don't mind because of just the way you are the first person I have read who has managed to understand Hector Barbossa and do his character justice.

I'm liking this know, it's starting to get a brillient plot and it's original, to start with I thought it was just an excuse for hot sex (not that there's anything wrong with that) but I'm finding it easier to read with the other stuff. but I love your imagery, especially in your first couple of chapter, with the fruit and flavours stuff. Keep going and update soon.

My, my, I am lazy. I haven't logged in for a single review. But that is not the point. Your fic is definitely coming along nicely. I am definitely liking these flashbacks that explain how Barbossa got them and whatnot. Good show, good show. I can't wait for more chapters.

Sorry for not reviewing the last chapter, but I just got eadieading it today. It was lovely as well.

Keep up the great work. 'Til the next.

Myk

Methinks you should do both ^^. have a little Jack pain on the boat while they drag Will in. ...'course if you write anything really, I'll be happy! ::huggles::

Thank God you updated! I've been going out of my mind wondering what's going to happen next in this story. It's addictive. :)
This chapter was really good, and it's got me really, really wanting to know how Barbossa captures Will. Please, update soo)
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My rabbit ate the last apple in the house.....What am I gonna do NOW? ;)~

so Barbossa snuck on board... he may be a mean pirate, but he's not stupid.

I am fuzzled on the crew thing... weren't most of them dead or in prison? Or did I read that in another fic? (I'm on PotC slash overload! weee!)

I'm a little afraid to read how they get Will... of course that doesn't stop me from begging you to update as quickly as possible!

mmmmm... very tasty... (referring to apples, of course;) Glad to see someone seized the fine non-con possibilities presented by the movie in such a deliciously presented manner. Perhaps Jack gave in to the situation with slightly too little reluctance, but his wanting to protect Will (and not being able to) makes for such an interesting scenario. Wonderful story, please write more. *wanders off with a sudden craving for apples*