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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, I was too lazy to log iI wrI wras was well, but it is HP. I've been thinking of taking up Pirates of the Caribbean though, add a little change, a little spice.
Ahem, that is so not the point to this review. *winks* I know, I know, I'm a sick individual, but that was nice. Not the whole rape thingy...(not that I minded reading it. *blush*), but Jack being all protective of Will. Good show, good show! I hope to read more.
On a lighter note, I'm from...*conspiratorial whisper*...OHIO! Scarey, huh? Anywho, great job. Keep going.
Myk
Ahem, that is so not the point to this review. *winks* I know, I know, I'm a sick individual, but that was nice. Not the whole rape thingy...(not that I minded reading it. *blush*), but Jack being all protective of Will. Good show, good show! I hope to read more.
On a lighter note, I'm from...*conspiratorial whisper*...OHIO! Scarey, huh? Anywho, great job. Keep going.
Myk
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is really good.
Yes, I have a suggestion. Tie Will to the mast all night, just once. that would be fun.
Yes, I have a suggestion. Tie Will to the mast all night, just once. that would be fun.
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. You stayed true most of the time to the characters (although I'm guessin you had to imagine a bit with it, since disney would NEVER let something this interesting happen to their characters *sigh*) You said you're done. To which I say @.@. I hope you don't mean the story! There's too much potential! *drools at Possesive!Jack* What's amazing is this has got to be the only non-con I've read that's been well-written! Good job! *huggles*
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so sad and sweet. I'm really enjoying this story. :)
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and by the way: Kudos for the most creative use of apples I've ever seen! ;o)
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still love it! Jack's so sweet. Poor Will. Hope there's more soon.
-Aithilin
-Aithilin
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked what i read so far. I'm glad someone wrote a story about Barbossa. He was my favorite character. Please write more. A lot more. lol :-D
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Lookit that! I left another review...what do you know. I'm starting to get back into the swing of things! *grins and winks* Anywho, great new chapter. It just made me go 'aw!! how sweet!'. Hehe. It was nice, and I truly hope to see more. Please do continue. If you don't, I might juste toe to capture you, maroon you on a island (that has no rum), and leave you there. Ok?
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue this. It's so good. And I would definatly like to see what would happen with Jack in the bed and Will in the chair. And then meybe Jack and Will on the bed with Barbossa watching from the chair... Hmm.. That could be an interesting idea. = )
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July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I wish to see more of this one soon. ^_~