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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
two words... WRITE MORE!
That was so cool, you so need more...!
That was so cool, you so need more...!
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the first PotC dark fic I've read!! And *very* awesome, by the way. You definately have Barbossa's character! ^_^
Wow, I'm impressed beyond words really...
Ooh... Tossing poor Norrington into a fic like this? Well... that could prove interesting! ^_^V
Woo, love this story. Definately keep with the awesome work!
Wow, I'm impressed beyond words really...
Ooh... Tossing poor Norrington into a fic like this? Well... that could prove interesting! ^_^V
Woo, love this story. Definately keep with the awesome work!
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. :) I could FEEL the angst and tension. My one teensy qualm was the lack of development for Will. But it's only two chapters in, and circumstances are a bit extreme, so it's not a real problem at all. :)
I'd be very interested to see how you'd fit Norrington into the mix. I'm sure you'll manage something great. Go for it! :)
I'd be very interested to see how you'd fit Norrington into the mix. I'm sure you'll manage something great. Go for it! :)
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is the BEST fic!!!!! Need more NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!! Write a longer chapter NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! O_o
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hehehe... this was interesting to say the least. i enjoyed it and i most certainly hope you continue writing and updating your works.
merci beaucoup pour les histoirs amusants et vifs!!
silver fox
;)
merci beaucoup pour les histoirs amusants et vifs!!
silver fox
;)
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You posted more!!
I'm not in Ohio, in Illinois though, is that close enough?
I don't know what all you should add, but maybe a flashback to explain all this? I know, I'm weird, I like to know how they get to this point.
is the crew still damned or was the curse lifted?
and Barbossa's apple fetish is kinda creepy...
I'm not in Ohio, in Illinois though, is that close enough?
I don't know what all you should add, but maybe a flashback to explain all this? I know, I'm weird, I like to know how they get to this point.
is the crew still damned or was the curse lifted?
and Barbossa's apple fetish is kinda creepy...
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOT HOT HOT!! I LOVED this. (Is it hot in here or is it just me?)
Quite frankly I never would've imagined a fic with Barbossa to be, well, YUMMY, but it was! Well done! Perhaps a bit more of Jack would have been nice, but that's merely because I'm more partial to him. ^_^
Honestly though, this fic was great. Yeah, ok, so I have a thing for non-con. *shrugs* That's why I loved the fic!
Are you planning on writing any more chapters? I'd love some more!
Quite frankly I never would've imagined a fic with Barbossa to be, well, YUMMY, but it was! Well done! Perhaps a bit more of Jack would have been nice, but that's merely because I'm more partial to him. ^_^
Honestly though, this fic was great. Yeah, ok, so I have a thing for non-con. *shrugs* That's why I loved the fic!
Are you planning on writing any more chapters? I'd love some more!
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Squee* I mea. Ba. Barbossa's explanation to will was too good. I literally had to stop and read it aloud to my sister it was so good. Suck until you ge the the cream... oy, you are a genius, albeit an evil one.
As for adding Norrington, if you can do it, I wanna see it, that's for sure! Your imagery was once again amazing. I mean, really, we are all in this for the pretty boys. You describe them so well. Well, except Barbossa, who isn't pretty, but his personality more than covers for it.
I'd like to see some of Jack's and Will's thoughts. They've got to be interesting. *wonders at them* Hmmm.
As for adding Norrington, if you can do it, I wanna see it, that's for sure! Your imagery was once again amazing. I mean, really, we are all in this for the pretty boys. You describe them so well. Well, except Barbossa, who isn't pretty, but his personality more than covers for it.
I'd like to see some of Jack's and Will's thoughts. They've got to be interesting. *wonders at them* Hmmm.
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great start! You've really caught my attention. I'm just dying to read more. Please update again soon, I can't wait!!!!
Leah
Leah
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July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Great chapter! Very descriptive! You have most definately caught my attention!!! I do so love non-con! Update soon ?! PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE!!!!!!!!! Is goodgood, yes.... Well, Namaarie.
~Celesta Hellewise Harman
~Celesta Hellewise Harman