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Ohhhh I love you for writing this. Truley the best fanfiction I have read, ever. (And I have been reading them for a long time!) Oh your characterization is perfect and the dialog is to die for. You make me want to give up the pen and just sit around reading your fiction forever. I'm not being overly dramatic, I assure you. You must write more, and then more stories after that! Please! Although, as a college student myself, I know how hard it is to update at times. Maybe you should drop a few courses and work on this.... Just kidding. I love it. Drink up me Hearties! YoHo!
Dusty

Oh that was breath taking.. and heart breaking.. and all those other things that explain why i am short of breath right now!! Jack finally got his sword!! And his reaction.. and Wills reaction.. and andand.. ahhhhhh.. lossing cohey.. y.. .. desending into babble mode.. love rea really very well done.. mmm lovely way to leave us though.. now we all have drooly wet sticky thoughts going through our minds.. sweet! Can't wait for them to really *cough* talk!! as always.. more soon please.. Wren

Hey, that was only minimal groping of Turner there. Well at least there was a little. Good stuff , keep it up.

Hey, that was only minimal groping of Turner there. Well at least there was a little. Good stuff , keep it up.

Don't mind the doubles, my computer had an epileptic fit

This is coming along just great!
We get to see Jack, Will and Jack get together...
All we need now is action. And I don't mean t"fla"flashy-explosions-and-gun-fire" kind. Savvy? ;)

Lovely story~! Not choppy or plotless at all! Well written also! Can't wait for more!

Hey! How could you be so mean and cut it off at the good part. I better see more of this in the next chapter. Oh, and you are totally correct about where the best swords come from. I have personally used swords from Toledo, Spain, Milan, and Italy ( I was trained in fencing ). My personal favorites are from Italy and Spain. Esecially Italy. Good good swords. Well, congrats on your correctness ( don't know if thats a word ). I like to see well read authors. I will be waiting for your next update. Good Luck!

Pretty good all around. You've got the commadore all wrong, but you seem to know that. The dreams are cheesy, but not soul-scarringly so. I like the overall feel of it, and Will, Jack, and Elizabeth aren't exactly don, on, but more than close enough for government work. You use "savvy?" wrong a few times though. Savvy's connotations run from "see?" to "got it motherfucker?!" Still and all, a most creditable effort. *bows with flourish of feathered pirate hat.*

BY FAR this has been the best chapter yet! I loved it, the length of it, how it flowed. My favorite scene was probably when Will left the ship and Jack followed him and then through to when Jack is speechless. The kiss was very well done ^^ And then Will had a line saying he'd rather die at Jack's side.....liked that too. I'll be waiting for the next chapter ^^