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August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I came here to review earlier then got dictedcted ^_^' Anyhow...
Ooh, do we get Jack/Will smut?? lol. I just love that word, smut. ^_^' Very nicely written! I liked how you got Jack to Tortuga without him just having impeccable timing, very believable.
It's always a pleasure reading your work, I just love it! Can\ait ait for the next installment!
^_^
Ooh, do we get Jack/Will smut?? lol. I just love that word, smut. ^_^' Very nicely written! I liked how you got Jack to Tortuga without him just having impeccable timing, very believable.
It's always a pleasure reading your work, I just love it! Can\ait ait for the next installment!
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August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cheers to a new piece of the story! Mmm, rum would do well, I do suppose.
I have been enjoying the read thus far and am sure I will enjoy the read unto the end. The cliff-hanger was well worth it to be rewarded with Chapter 5, very much so. As always, superb and dead-on characterization, as well as brilliant writing.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
-T
I have been enjoying the read thus far and am sure I will enjoy the read unto the end. The cliff-hanger was well worth it to be rewarded with Chapter 5, very much so. As always, superb and dead-on characterization, as well as brilliant writing.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
-T
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August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. I look forward to your updates. Keep up the great work! :)
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August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Miss Greenleaf...
O wow... that was such a beautiful kiss. The sexual tension and anticipation were built perfectly, and I smiled giddily when our boys lips met for the first time... Without a word, I could sense the blood flow south in their bodies... allowing for furhter, ahem, tension.
Wonderfully written...
Eagerly anticipating the sex scene... but it's so built up!! the pressure! the pressure! Can you handle it?
haha,
Renee
O wow... that was such a beautiful kiss. The sexual tension and anticipation were built perfectly, and I smiled giddily when our boys lips met for the first time... Without a word, I could sense the blood flow south in their bodies... allowing for furhter, ahem, tension.
Wonderfully written...
Eagerly anticipating the sex scene... but it's so built up!! the pressure! the pressure! Can you handle it?
haha,
Renee
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm new to POTC fanfics, and J/W in general (but coming from an H/D fangirl's POV...I'll be thoroughly immensed in J/W soon...;P) anyway, VERY VERY VERY IC characters! I've read a couple that put Jack thoroughly out of character, but yours is wonderful! AWESOME job!
Hehe...as i like it, slow and steady, no NC-17 smut quite yet ^^...
Savvy!
~Jen
Hehe...as i like it, slow and steady, no NC-17 smut quite yet ^^...
Savvy!
~Jen
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful story and it's bloody well-written to boot. Very interesting, moving, and engaging. The characterizations are excellent and very well portrayed.
The sword fight was awesome and well written as well. Just as well, the introduction of Jack back on the scene is very welcoming. How very tantalizing a place you leave us all off.
I hope to be able to read until the ending.
-T
The sword fight was awesome and well written as well. Just as well, the introduction of Jack back on the scene is very welcoming. How very tantalizing a place you leave us all off.
I hope to be able to read until the ending.
-T
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! New chapter! I just love how long your chapters are *sigh* just love it I tell you. And I'm so glad that Jack and Will are together now. Wait, I'm pretty much glad about every freakin' thing that happend in this chapter. ^_^ You know that end author note about the jack/will leash thing? Well thanks to that sentence, I snorted out of laughter... and then started cough Tha Thanks a lot! ^_^ hehehe. Definitely looking forward to more of this awesome fieep eep up the FANTASTIC work!!!!
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, keep up the good work, I want to read more ~_~
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kya! I'm going to have to draw chibi Jack and Will now. ;P And we're finally getting close to the pirate smut! Will it bein the next chapter? please say yes. pleeeeeeaaaasse.....
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ContinuecontinuecontinuecontinueCONTINUUUUUE!!!!! Nownownownownooowwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11!1!1!!! I'm hyyyypeeeeerrrr and this story is so gooooood!
Ahem. Yeah. You're a great writer, and i could tell by the terms you use the footnotes that you do research, a habit all good writers are sure to take up. :D
Ahem. Yeah. You're a great writer, and i could tell by the terms you use the footnotes that you do research, a habit all good writers are sure to take up. :D