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July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh this is so great! Probably just about the best fic i've read so far. There really is a strong lack of good PotC fics out there.... *pouts* Fortunately, this has relieved the drought for the time being! ^_^ Though i'll need another chapter soon. Unless, of course, you want my metaphorical blood on your hands after i die from hunger strike. :D
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July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far ^^ Evil of you to leave it off with Jack showing up....For some reason I'm overly amused with the part when Jack first said something and Will fell over right after standing. Kw^ Ve^ Very good, continue soon. *Kills Norrington* He's very evil, ne? Teme.....I didn't like him in the movie and I in general hate him X_x
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OOooOOoo. Finally Jack comes into the picture! I am so excited about this. Excellent story thus far, and great way of unfolding the plot. Not too slow, nor too fast.
This is most certainly up in my faves! Love this writing style of yours.
-!tongs
This is most certainly up in my faves! Love this writing style of yours.
-!tongs
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Squeeee!! We got Jack!! Everyone look Jack's here! Jack! Jack hey! Hey Jack we missed you!! lol.. sorry couldn't resist..
Another great chapter really you leave us wanting more but leave nothing out of what you have written.. i certainly hope you are not looking for constructive critisism cause while i found things i liked muchly i didn't find anything to complain about!! And i never pick on things that a beta can fix !! So after reading the other reviews i thought i would put in my own two cents!!
Loved the scene between Norrington and Will, it made me want to poof out me chest and beat it in a manly way! Ok now that was just odd! Ignore that bit! But really loved Will downdressing the commador in public.. hehe.. good on you mate!! And then the ' I shall be gone by ‘morrow noon, in search of my love' was brilliant.. truthful but not leading!! Wonderful i wish i could do half as well with my fics as you are doing with this story!!
And the fact that the story had spred so fast as to beat hime!! e!! sooo like a small town.. i should know i live in one!! and mr brown redeeming his drunk self was cool and a bit of a pirate himself!!
Loved the name of the ship that will caught.. 'the ass' indeed.. hehehe.. lol
Poor Will with those nightmares.. now that he is with Jack again maybe they will stop.. and he will have hehe.. more pleasurable dreams!!! lol...
And a message for Cat.. stop it stop it.. let the woman write!!! lol..
As always.. more soon please.. Wren
Another great chapter really you leave us wanting more but leave nothing out of what you have written.. i certainly hope you are not looking for constructive critisism cause while i found things i liked muchly i didn't find anything to complain about!! And i never pick on things that a beta can fix !! So after reading the other reviews i thought i would put in my own two cents!!
Loved the scene between Norrington and Will, it made me want to poof out me chest and beat it in a manly way! Ok now that was just odd! Ignore that bit! But really loved Will downdressing the commador in public.. hehe.. good on you mate!! And then the ' I shall be gone by ‘morrow noon, in search of my love' was brilliant.. truthful but not leading!! Wonderful i wish i could do half as well with my fics as you are doing with this story!!
And the fact that the story had spred so fast as to beat hime!! e!! sooo like a small town.. i should know i live in one!! and mr brown redeeming his drunk self was cool and a bit of a pirate himself!!
Loved the name of the ship that will caught.. 'the ass' indeed.. hehehe.. lol
Poor Will with those nightmares.. now that he is with Jack again maybe they will stop.. and he will have hehe.. more pleasurable dreams!!! lol...
And a message for Cat.. stop it stop it.. let the woman write!!! lol..
As always.. more soon please.. Wren
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is positively one of the most WELL-WRITTEN (and sexy) fics I've ever read on PotC. Now, you haven't actually got to the SEX part yet, (get to it, woman!), but I looooove the dream sequencing, how you've made the whole story mesh together perfectly with the end of the movie. I can't wait for Jack/Will smut. OHHHHHHOHHH YEAH.
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is getting to be a lovly little bit of a tale there 'lassie'. Keep it up. Oh, and the rest of us want some "Turner action" too. Bring on the smut.!.
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, one more thing, loved the description of the sword. (Can I have one? And a plushie too?) Fight scene was well written--not an easy thing to accomplish--getting the feel of movement and all. Brava(o?). Side note, gold inlay is gold, but gold's a soft metal (bite it and it dents--really! Try it, very weird.) and without something underneath it, it'll warp. And that's a Very Bad Thing for a hilt. Hilts are Good Things. They protect your hand. But I'm sure Will already compensated for the inlay.
Love Brown in the chapter too. ^_^ That's a wonderful, kind thing he did to help Will out.
Does Will have a cool sword too...? *evil grin*
Love Brown in the chapter too. ^_^ That's a wonderful, kind thing he did to help Will out.
Does Will have a cool sword too...? *evil grin*
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love it^_^ I really enjoy how you work the dream scenes; very realistic! And Norrington is wonderfully written, very much in character.
Finally, some Jack/Will! It's about time. ^_-
I can't wait for more of this! I'd love to see how you work parts of the challenge into it!
It's very rewarding being your beta; I get to read the chapters early!
^_^V
Finally, some Jack/Will! It's about time. ^_-
I can't wait for more of this! I'd love to see how you work parts of the challenge into it!
It's very rewarding being your beta; I get to read the chapters early!
^_^V
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Jack! And Norrington got what he deserved... Though I think he should be hung, 'cause that would be amusing. Anyway, love it. Can't wait for more.
-Aithilin
-Aithilin
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July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
yay! they finally met up! *squee* you make Norrington just as ass-y and stuck up as in the movie. good for Elizabeth! and I'm from Virginia so major major props there. major props on the sword fight. loved it. cant wait for more!