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Weak?? !! Are you crazy?? that was perfect.. what a lovely chapter.. oh wow.. i have to go read the whole thing again just to take the measure of it really.. .. i am really going to have to go take a look at the challenge you keep mentioning.. that was bitter sweet.. can't wait to see the commodors reaction and please please jack soon.. lol.. love the way will puts emotion into his work.. so is it a little heart magic or what.. lol.. grr.. ok going to re re re read this.. lol.. Wren

Hello, I would like to say, I adore your work. You managed to create and capture the vibrant purity of the character William Turner. You managed to get Elizabeut out of the way without destroying her persona and keeping her the type of woman she is and has always been. You are truly excelling in this story and I hope you will receive all the feedback you deserve.

-sucks her jolly roger lolli-
Nita

*grins* I particularly like the part where Elizabeth was talking about that night when she and Jack were marooned on the island. Sounds like something Jack would do...have a bit too much rum and start talking. ^_^ And despite my...problems with not liking Elizabeth, I for one am happy she got away from that Commodore Norrington. Still loving this fic, keep on writing!

Love, Pirates, Rum, and Slash.
Finduilas

Jack you better hurry or Will might not be in very good shape for much longer no thanks to the Commander.

His 'dream' was freaking weird! But so far damn good. The thing with his shoe was funny. Do more!

I love it!! In all seriousness, I really do love it.
It's a wonderful fic, and the fluidity (...I'm hoping that's a word...cursed summer vacation is melting my brain) of your words ties everything together all so well!! Your descriptions of feelings and character portrayal is great. And, as much as I openly despise Elizabeth, your way of fading out the so-called love between her and Will to just platonic friendship instead of just killing her off is admirable. (Although that killing her off idea, it is tempting, I tell you...)
Do continue, otherwise i'll take away all your rum, savvy? ^_^

Love, Pirates, Rum, and Slash,
Finduilas

Oi, blimey! This is excellent!! ^______^ Whee, and it's going to be a long or partly long story, eh? Will/Jack are the cutest couple (and it's not too bad that I have fantasies involving Orlando and Johnny ^_~ lol) So, update this marvelous story very soon, 'kay?

Oh Please say that isn't it.. more more.ore.. we are going to get Elizabeth married off to someone worthy right.. will it be the commodor or an OC?? I can't wait for will and jack to get togetherase ase say you are going tote tte that part too.. not that were you left it isn't ok too.. but only if you are really really barbbosa evil.. lol.. laters wren..

I love it so far! Haha, a story for me! You need to assign me something now. Maybe tomorrow while we're painting the town red. Don't forget the rum! ;) Jack is my hero. This review doesn't make much sense. I just feel special because it's a story for me, and I get to read it as a work in progress. Woo! Give me something to write for you!

I wounder what dreams Jack is having? His his mind showing him Will being killed by the pirets to lift their cures dening him the chanse to show Will how much he loves him? Pleace update soon.