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Ooh, ooh, keep going! *grins* I like it. How was he making swords in the asylum, though? Or was that before... Or am I just weird...

Please continue. I'm very intrigued!

I really like this beginning, it's not one where Will finds out that he isn't actually *in* love with Elizabeth....it follows the movie where as they do love eachother, but he can love Jack too..... and I'm very curious as to why Jack cha his his appearance....please update soon

PLEASE write more! this is getting VERY interesting!


Alex

*claps* Stunning, luv. This is coming along very well. ^_^
Me, I'm currently resisting the urge to go skipping about the room, singing. ^_^; Hee, figures Jack would take them to some sort of inn crossed with a brothel...And for dear Will to be knocked out and half-naked on the bed. (Oh the possibilities).......(And for Jack to be completely naked in the bathtub. Passed out. Drunk. Such a dear.)
Will is starting to get over the Elizabeth years, it seems. Good for him! Much better to be drunk and with someone else than depressed and all alone in the dark.
Wellpe ype you update soon!!

Love, Pirates, Rum, and Slash.
Finduilas

You will write more, right? I want to know what has happened to Will, though I can kinda guess. I enjoy ywritwriting style and how you do Jack. Keep up the good work.

Looks like a good story. Can't wait for the next chap.

thanks for the reviews everyone

that was really good. i love it. please continlue.

Glad you let Will out of the crazy house so soon. It's a litly hard to do it in there.