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for Sparrow in the Wind

by LorandTab

person giova
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is still great! I can't wait for more.
person Clong
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! what can I say but this is ingenious...

I loved Cutthroat Island and Moragan when it came out.

I love JAck and POTC.

DAmn.. putting them together is like sweet torture, and you do it WELL!!!!

Excellent.!
person giova
schedule August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is still very good, but are there two cha 7? 7? Or have I just lost my mind. Anyway, please udate soon!
person tempore
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fucking yes, yes, yes.

Dear god. That whole thing was beautifuly written, soooo hot.

person giova
schedule August 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Will and Bowen?! My baby sister(who has a big crush on OB) would just die! I am still loving this fic, and hope you write more very soon.
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eek! I'm SO glad Will finally has someone.
*continues to squeal*
PLEASE LET THEM GET TOGTHER IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!! PLEASE!!!!

*gushes*
I just started to read this fic for Jack smut, and fell in love with how Morgan adores his ass. *drools* Made me fall in love with him all over again. I've never seen CTI, but I like Morgan's character. Has she finally reached that place she's longed for?

And I was ESTATIC to see Will in here! PLEASE have some more B/W smut!! How old is he, any ways? 15? 17? At first I thought he was like ten, but as I read on, I realized he had to be older.

PLEASE!!!! MORE B/W SMUT!!!!!!!

And MORE of Jack's LOVELY ASS!! Must see that tan hide again...

^_~GN
person ~=tARA:-)
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
One word speaks it all: BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
;-)u hau have just earned the top spot on my list of all-time favorite writers! Congrats...
And THANK YOU for writing and sharing!

Much love,
~=tARA:-)
person giova
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love this! "the woman she was and the man he wasn't" that was hysterical! Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Havoc
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love both movies and am enjoying this story a lot, (Morgan and Jack are a riot together) but I'm having a difficult time following the time line. And where did Shaw go? Is there anyway you could add more dates of something? I have no brain at all during the summer.
person giova
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this! I can't wait for more- Love the way you have put the two movies together. Very well done!