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by Muse

person HoneyB
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*yawn*

person Avy
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally finished this amazing story. You've written a classic - perfect 'til the very end. I eagerly await the next story you and your muses have planned, hope the bunnies are biting like mad. In the meantime I'll be re-reading this brilliant piece of fiction. Thanks for your wonderful 'Dragonfly'. *stands up and applauds wildly*
person Moonshine
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*MAD APPLAUSE* Bravo, my friend, bravo! Job well done. I don't know why no one is posting reviews, but that works out find because I get to be the first to congratulate you on the completion of a wonderful story. From beginning to end the plot, your righting style, your portrayal of the characters (both OC & Movie) kept me coming back for more. I couldn't get enough of this story. I'm glad you finally finished, but a part of me wishes this could go on forever and ever. Again, congrats. I would be interested in reading anything else you have. Please feel free to email me.
person Moonshine
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMIGOD!!! Finally, finally they've gotten together. Gurl.... you made us wait, but I'd have to say it was well and truly worth it. The passion between them, the feelings and emotion. And Jack!! I can't say enough good things about your portrail of Captain Jack Sparrow. What's going to happen to Jacinto, I know you're not just going to let him get off scott-free? Or are you going to save him forossiossible sequel? Whatever you do, I know it will be as brilliant as the rest of this creation. Thanks for sharing this with us! :-)
person Blue Magic
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this opening scene of Sabine healing Will with her touch. True on so many levels, isn't it? REally beautifully done. Always anxious to see what comes next
person Daisy
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I am still enjoying your story very much, I get so excited each time I see there's an update. I don't know if you know this, though, but Norrington's first name is James. There was a deleted scene where Elizabeth calls him by first name... I did some major searching when I started my story, and I managed to find it! Thanks and keep writing, I love your story! *~*~* Daisy
person Jamie
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was so happy to see that this had been updated. I love Sabine's strength, and I cannot wait to see what plan Jack devises to rescue her as well as Sabineand and Will's reunion. Please post more soon!

Jamie :)
person Blue Magic
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story gets better with every chapter. You are doing a wonderful job of spinning your tale and I am really enjoying it.
person Moonshine
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!! I can't believe the last couple of chapters. This thing is taking off like a freaking rocket, and this last chap.... DAMN!! Sabine thinking Will is dead. That's beautiful, absolutely marvelous. I can't wait to see what you've got in store for them next. By the way, I love that you'rougrought Elizabeth and Gezana back into the scene, does this mean, since she's Senora Norrington that the Commedore is going to come along for the ride? Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens.


Luv,
Lex
person Fan81981
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You finally updated and it was well worth the wait. I was wondering what you were going to do now that WIll has declared his love and you didn't disappoint. I am waiting on pins and needles for the new chapter.

The best thing is that you write romance without getting smuttty. No PWP this one.

Update soon please.

Fan