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Hey great chapter, I can't wait to see what happens between Sabine and Will , if she falls over board will Will save her. Anyways great chapter, can't wait for the next update. Keep the stories coming alright!!! I love this Fic.

OMG I didn't realize how hooked I was to your story. Everyday since you wrote chapter 15 I've been checking, and now im dying for chapter 17. Please hurry. Later

this is a wonderful story. you are an impeccable writer. i hope you will continue adding to it. it would be a waste to leave it here. my suggestions for what should happen: don't have her do anything with the oliver guy. when she gets back to the ship have will corner her in their room and force her to tell him everything (how she feels, what shets, ts, and especially what happened that night--he needs to know) then have him make love to her, not have sex with her but make love to her and show her what it can be like. then continue on to find the treasure.

please continue writing, it is rare to come across a wonderful story like this. just keep writing even if its just for me to read (hahaha).

okay you make us wait forever and a day for a new chapter, then you deliver with this and the length. I only have one thing to say to you... SUBLIME!!! Your work, your words, the feelings and emotion you are able to convey. Why aren't you writting and selling books somewhere? I love the friction between the two lovers, and can't wait to see how you have them overcome it (yes, I have no doubt they will). I also like the way Oliver didn't turn all assholey when he discoveredine ine wasn't going to be the one for him. (For a minute I thought you were going to have him do something nasty to her, thrilled you didn't). And I love the way you have JACK of all people advising Will on women! You have managed to amaze me with another wonderful chapter! Can't wait for 16!

I have been reg thg this story faithfully since you started. I think I must have read it three or four times already. I feel compelled to re-read practically everything whenever you update. It is just that you update so infrequently these days *pout*.

Your write very well - a very controlled style of writing which is both lucid and interesting. Sabine is a fantastic OC - real, but still intriguing. I was so afraid this would become a Mary Sue but it really hasn't. And you have caught the voices of Will and jack so well as well.

I can't wait to read the rest. I hope you update sooner. Waiting impatienly,
Fan81981

I am really enjoying yuor story... it is very well-written. Please post more soon. *~*~* Daisy

Brilliant chapter! But just when Will is about to stop whining and do something sensible, Sabine has to spend the night at Oliver's. OMG!!!!!!! I't 't wait to see Will's reaction, these two are driving me crazy but as I've said before I adore them and the story you've crafted - I'll be checking daily for updates...no pressure ;)

This is an awesome story. The plot is well thought out, the Pirates characters are exactly how they should be, the Sabine character is amazing. It draws you in and holds you captive. I check for a new chapter almost everyday.

Your story gets better with each update, your writing is wonderful. Their inability to deal with their true feelings for each other is so touching. Sabine is such a cool heroine - I absolutley adore her. I am excited to see how your new character is going to play into everything. You still have the best Pirates fic I've seen anywhere, every chapter is worth the wait...can't wait for the next one.

I agree, this is the BEST Priates fanfiction out there hands down! At least the best one that I have read. Everytime I see you've updated I get excited. Very interesting chapter, and I like how it finally came out that he called Elizabeth's name. I also like how you've got the "I can't make you love me" angle going. It makes it all very angsty, and captivating. Hurry with the next chapter girl and keep up the excellent work.