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by Muse

person DarkSeductress
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your story is absolutely wonderful. There's no wordr itr it....and if anyone has been telling you otherwise, they should definitely be shot. There's not a loophole in the plot to be found and the characters seem real. It's an awesome masterpiece.
~DarkSeductress~
person moonshine
schedule December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YOU SCARED ME!!! I was afraid I would never hear/read another chapter again. Don't you ever do that to me again... now that that's out of the way... DAUMN!! That was a good, no great, chapter. One of the best so far. I loved the fight scene on the Lucielle, and I loved the tender moment between Will and Sabine before he stuck his foot in his mouth again. Those two really need to sit down and have a talk... or maybe all they need is a good fuck. Either way, please don't make me wait so long again, you know this is my absolute favorite story.
person becca
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omigod!! wonderfull!! please write more!
person Avi
schedule December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You've turned out yet another wonderful chapter. I am still in love with this story, but had almost given up looking for an update. Please don't make the wait so long for the next one. Pretty please???
person Palia
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is so great! please continue writing it, i'm addicted!
person Ryo
schedule October 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jack fighting a woman??? Yeah, somehow I can see that happenin' with the old scallywag. ;-) This is a good solid chapter, mate. No one said transformation is easy; Sabine is definitely beginning to see that. The question is, is Will? And if so, what's he going to do about it? Hrm...I suppose I'll have to wait until the future chapters, right? ;-) (Like I can talk; I'm just now starting chapter 9, hehe)
person steph
schedule October 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good lord this story is awesome. I LOVE that part where she punches Jack, that is the best. Really Sabine is one of the best original characters I've ever seen in a fic, and this fic is very good. I love how you're not having Sabine tell Will why she's so pissed off with him. Good girl! Let him suffer! *evil laugh* Anyway I hope you never stop writing this fic. It's wonderful. Update soon!
person Ryo
schedule October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I guess I should feel sorry for Will, huh? Well guess what? I do...and I don't. ;-) But I suppose that was your intent, huh? ;-) Excellent chapter, mate. Make Will squirm a bit more, and *then* I'll *consider* rooting for him, again. ;-)
person moonshine
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well hell, you just keep on shoveling them out don't you? I lovhe bhe beginning, the remorseful Will (as well he should be, the lil' bastard). And I loved that fact that Sabine isn't just giving in and asking him to sweep her off her feet, even though it's clear she's still got some serious feeling for Will. You are really writing the both of them (not to mention Jack) beautifully. I also liked the little angeange between, Anamaria, and Sabine... then between Jack and Will. I really think that young man could benefit with a father figure type right now, and since no one else is around, Jack might as wdo ido it. So when are you going to have Will and Sabine have another go at it? If so when and what's going to lead up to it. I can't wait for the next chapter ms. thang!!
person Egypt
schedule October 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! Can't wait to see what going to happen next between the two. And when are they going to tell each other that they love one another. I can't wait till that happens, they are dealing with mixed emotions right now. Man you are so good keep up the good work. I'm expecting to read alot from you. Your a great writer.