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And now the "genius" knows what he did to piss my girl off. I've told you this offline, but damn if you're not the "Angst Queen"! (Somehow you wrestled that title from me...I'll have to wrestle it back, you know) I liked how you made Sabine strong enough to resist breaking down in Mary Sue fashion before Will; let her do that out of sight (like a sista would, ya heard?) And Jack...what can I say about Mr. Sparrow? I luv the stinkin' bastid; bring more of him on, please! ;-)

That was awesome, just completely awesome! I'm loving the way you are bringing Jack and Anna-Maria to life, I also like the way Anna-Maria is starting to warm up to Sabine, those two would probably make great friends. And the way Sabine decked the shit out of Will... you go girl. Another marvelous chapter cracked out and away. So you know I can't wait to see how Will tries to make this up to Sabine, and if she will take him back with open arms, or make him CRAWL!!!

ARGH!! I know you probably think I hated this chapter... on the contrary, I loved it. But this friggin site kept going out of service every friggin time I tried to post my review. Like I said, I love it, it was a great chapter, but then, I'm starting to expect nothing less from you. I love that Sabine knows what really happened, but poor dumb Will thinks it was someone else he slept with. Boy is he in for a RUDE awakening. I do hope you update soon. I'm starting to become and addict, and this story is my drug of choice!

And so the transformation begins. Bless Sabine's heart; she's got one hell of a hill to climb. As for "he which shall not be named in this review" (i.e., Will)...serves him right! ;-) You know I eagerly await the next chapter, to see how Anna (who needs to chill out) and Jack react to the new, improved "Dragonfly"?

Hey I can't wait to see if Will is ever going to find out thabinabine is he one hes slept with and how will he react to finding out that he took her virginity. Man this story just keeps getting better ans better can't wait for you to update the story. You go girl this is the best damn fic I've read so far that has to do with POTC. Keep on writing.

Let me at him! I'll throttle that bastard! That is so wrong, so very very wrong. Poor Sabine! Yet I could see this happening...and I think it works quite well. Excellent writing as usual, keep up the good work!

OH HELL NO HE DIDN'T!!! Why that lil'... I am very angry at Mr. William Turner right now (even if technically it was the demon alcohol in him), still, how could he do that to Sabine. Poor thing, I just want to hug her and tell her everything will be alright. I love how you wrote that scene, and that you didn't go the easy route and make her first time all magical and pain free. It felt real, everything that was happening felt real, even the shift in Will. I also adore the chemistry between Anna-Maria and Jack. Those two are a hoot! I can completely see Jack being a breast man. Hopefully Anna will "sense" something's wrong with Sabine and cut her some slack. G cha chapter, girlfriend... you did it again!!

That sumbitch...that sonuvabitch...that's all I will say about that sorry bastid. I agree with Moonshine's kudos on the realism of the sex scene. Of all the chapters--of all the stories--I've read of yours, this is one of the best. Every time you keep it real, every time you take a character and make him/her your own, and that's what I love about your writing. You do realize that you've raised the bar for me...yet again, right? ;-)

You're doing fargin' fantastic, mate. Keep the chapters coming!!

I can't believe Will in this chapter. All that business of him warning Sabine about how other men look at her and how she needs protection and he treats her the same way. Don't get me wrong I adore Will but I hope once he sobers up he remembers everything he did and most importantly said and spends the rest of the story begging Sabine's forgiveness. Alcohol is an evil thing!

Oh my dear Lord, that was unbelievably evil of you!....I LOVE IT!