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Wow...absolutely amazering update!!! Absolutely loved it, you are an excellent writer! :)

Do post more soon! ^__^

Wow. That was...wow. It's gonna be really interesting 2 see what happens between Will and Sabine next. Keep up the good work!

OK so finally they have sex. But man how can Will do that to her, even though he was intoxicated it's still painful that he said his ex lovers name at the end, now that just flat out sucks.Man hasn't she been through enough already. I love Will but he really pissed me off in this chapter. He just screwed up everything . Can't wait to see how hegoingoing to make it up to her, if he even remembers when he's sober. Well can't wait for the next chapter.Excellent cliffhanger by the way. Keeps your readers guessing whats going to happen next.Please!!! Don't wait to long to update.

I enjoyed reading this story. It's very well-written, with lovely use of imagery. All of the original characters are great, especially Sabine. She's pleasantly different from the normal PotC original female characters.

My one qualm is Will. I'm sorry to say, but he's pretty out of character. Will would never do anything "improper" unless it was a matter of extreme urgency. He would never sleesideside a woman who wasn't his wife, no matter how long they had known each other and how close they were. He wouldn't be that openly affectionate, either. He was always careful to maintain a sense of propriety with Elizabeth in the movie, despite how deeply in love with her he was. Will is just too uptight and careful to behave the way he does in this fic.

Aside from this minor problem (which isn't really that bad in the grand scheme) , the story is very good. I like the twist it's taken, with Will and Sabine finally moving to the next stage while Will is still in love with Elizab It\ It'll be interesting to see what happens next. :)

Nice chapter. Keep the chapters coming. The story just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait for the next chapter and see whats going to happen next between Will and Sabine. And I'm so glad that Jack finally made an appearance, although I can't say the same for Ana Marie. Geez what an asshole she is to Sabine, and she doesn't even know her. Oh well can't wait for the next update

perfect in all ways but one: i need more...please keep writing

JACK!!! Oh, gurl. You did him beautifully! I could totally see Johnny giving his Jack swagger to your dialogue. And the beginning of the chapter.... THUD!! Damn that first mate for coming in, and damn Sabine for not wanting to talk about it (but I can't get too mad at her... I love her so). I also loved the little daydream Will slipped into. I was craking up at the end of that. Okay... I agree with Ryo... you have to post chap 8. NOW!! :-D

Well now *that's* what I call a chapter, mate!! I don't have to tell you I admire the way you really get into the characters' emotions and bring them out so vividly...but I will. ;-) And I LOVE that Jack has finally made his appearance as only he can! Anna Maria--*sigh*. Sista gurl's tryin' to get on my nerves trip' ov' over Sabine, but I reckon I can understand why if I had a catch like Jack...wait a minute, what the hell am I thinking? ;-) Seriously though, the story just keeps getting better, mate. Way to go!! :-)

*Now* you can bring on Chapter 8. ;-)

Nicely done, mate! Very very nice! Good to see Will at least *wonder* where his heart wants to be. Bugger if you didn't tease us with the "look I want to kiss her" bit, but I understand why you had to do it. Also good that you brought her feelings of grief and revenge back into play, instead of casting them to the side. Should make for an interesting metamorphisis of the lass.

So...where's chapter 8?

I reckon I ought to push for Chapter Seven before Eight, right? ;-)