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August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW. This story is amazing so far! I lurve it! Keep going!
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August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'M NOT WORTHY!! I'M NOT WORTHY!! My sista, my sista, I do believe this is the best chapter so far. Yes, I know I say that about all of them, but dang girl, thatbecabecause you keep bringing it strong. I love the sexual tension that's building between Sabine and Will, sh mak make for a pretty interesting sexual situation (hint hint). :-D So of course, you know the drill... come on with Chapter 7, because I need to see what happens when these two wake up. Are they going to do the do? Don't make me wait too long, ya hear!
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August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
UUUMMMMMM!!!!! NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!! you defintely have me hooked girl. this is one of the BEST will/ofc i have ever read. keep it going. I only make one comment per story that i read and yet this is my second review for yours.keep up the good work.
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August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Sabine! The lass has way too much to bear on her shoulders, doesn't she? Good to see Will's stepping up to the plate to help her out. Nice mix of confusion between hist ast and love for Elizabeth (the heffer), and his loyalty to Sabine. Like a few others have posted though, I have this to say: bring on Jack, savvy?! ;-)
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!! I thought that I was going to have to wait an eternity to read what was going to happen next . I don't want to jump to things so quickly, but I want to know if they would ever confess about how they feel for each other? Anyways nice cliffhanger I got a feeling that our favorite drunken swashbuckling pirate is in the next chapter can't wait for the update and the rising relationship between Will and Sabine.
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August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HOT DAMN GIRL!!! Things are really starting to get interesting now, aren't they? Looks like Elizabeth no longer has solo control over Will's heart. It also looks like the boy is starting to wise up to what's right in front of him. Great chap! You know I'm looking forward to Jack hitting the scene. And you know I can't wait to see what you are going to have these two crazy kids do next.
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August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love it, i love it, i love it! i'm addicted, i think i can officially say this story is the best one on here, no joke. please write more!
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August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent fic, not only well plotted and interesting, but very well written. Looking forward to more more more *lol*.
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!!! How could you just leave it there? How could you just have her father's head blown off like that? You're just EVIL.... promise you'll never change, and promise you will update this story, SOON!!! I'm in love with it, with Sabine, and of course with Will, with his fine self. I like that you didn't make him all mad because she didn't lock the door, and I like that he felt guilty over the kiss, and his actions to a good friend. I do hope he realizes what he's got in front of him.
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YO HO HO.