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OMG THAT IS SO NOT WHAT I WAS GOING TO SAY! MY FRIEND THOUGHT IT WOULD BE 'funny' to throw a YO HO HO in there...lol. My heart swells with the loss of Sabine's father. I am so ASTONISHED that you killed him so quickly. I think Jacinto could have gotten so much more out of tha than just a map...Yeah, Im a pirate at heart, what can I say? FABULOUS story babes!

Maureen

'this is the last time Ill take the blame for the sake of being with you.' LP

I can't believe that bastard shot her father. This part of the story was so sad that I started to cry. I can't wait to find out what happens next. And when is Will ever going to tell Sabine how he feels about her? And when will Jack appear? I guess I have to be patient until the next chapter. Nice work on this chapter, it was a sad one, but a nice good one. keep up the good writing. jealous I

Hm, Hm, Hm...*shaking my head like Big Mama* Now you know that ain't right, killing the girl's father in front of her. *shaking my head again* Please tell me Jacinto bites it, and soon...please! As for Will, it's good to see he's coming around with that Elizabeth thang.

One of the things I truly like about your writing is your mastery of description. Some authors don't say enough, others say too damn much, but you achieve that perfect balance. As an avid reader, I certainly do appreciate it. :-)

Oh, and before I forget: YOU GO GIRL!!!

I LOVET YOT YOU UPDATE WITHIN 2 DAYS! Wohoo....

Well, I love the story and if you need any help or whatever....please feel free to write to me! Oh and if I dont get back to you in enough time...IM me at either RubZ Dawg 069 (AIM) or Sadbutrue22003 (yahoo)

TTYS, DEAR!

Maureen

Gurl, you've done it again. Just when I thought you couldn't take it up a notch, you go and raise the bar. But what's up with the cliffhanger. You know that's just cruel and unusally punishment. So now, as your payback you must update the next chapter this week. If you don't, I'll hunt you down and torture you. I will, I promise.

Awesome chapter! Superb! Poor Sabine, but poor Will, too, such romantic tragedy. *sighs* And such an evil, evil cliffhanger, it's not fair! Oh well, highly awaiting chapter 4 as soon as you can write it.

How would Busta Rhymes put it? Gimme some mo'!! :-D Great chapter, mate, though Will is starting to frustrate me. *Donning my Sophia attitude from the "Color Purple":

I luvs Will Turner, God knows I .but.but I'll knock him out if he don't get with Sabine! ;-)

Oh, this is soy vey very excellent! I hope you continue to find inspiration for this story and to update it.

Well said Ryo! Besides the more I think about it, if people really want to split hairs, Elizabeth could be considered a marysue. Anyone feel like sending a letter to Jerry or Gore? I think the bottom line is if someone don't like the story... don't read the story and keep the bitterness to themselves.

Okay Moonshine, I appreciate you defending my story's honor, but let's let this drop. First of all, I don't want this to become a place where you and Janice duke it out, flaming each other until ocean turns dark. I want my reviews to be that-- reviews. Second of all, you're giving her exacwhatwhat she wants. The fact that she checked the reviews to see if anyone responded proves that. She wants to get a rise out of someone and frankly I don't have the time to go through all that and you shouldn't stoop to her level. I know my story well enough to know it has no elements of Mary Sue in it, so her comment really doesn't bother me. I do find it interesting that she has no stories posted so I would like to issue this challenge to Janice. E-Mail (don't post here) specifics. You say they are in the story, okay, where? As a writer, even of fanfictions, I am willing to grow and evolve. So please, both of you... it ends here. Moonshine: I appreciate your reviews, so please continued, the encouragement is welcomed and if you have any suggestions, bring them on! Jancie: I expect since you don't like the story (and that's entirely your choice) that you won't be posting in the future. If for some reason you do read things you 't l't like, then please act like the adult you are supposed to be and, make your criticism constructive. So please, both of you, the author has made a request, please respect my wishes.