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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please continue with this story. i just read it and i REALLY want more. <33
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Exquisite piece of writing. The phrases are lyrical and flowing. The story is poignant and enthralling. I do hope you continue, but, seeing as how I found it on the near to last page, is this hope amiss? That would sadden me greatly. If you have continued this elsewhere, I would be much appreciative of a link or URL where I might further peruse it.
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, so definitely off to a good start!!!! I really like it, but could you come up with a more dramatic cliff hanger?!!!! I mean really, and in all actuallity I don't think it would be possible, so do you think you might tha that and ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER ANY TIME SOON?!!!! Please?!!! That is all, oh yeah, and keep writing, I like it a lot!!
Megan
Megan
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October 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey, i like this story... are you ever gonna update it? :)
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September 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAHHH! Keep g! g! I command you. ^_^
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August 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooo, i'm liking this story, please update it soon!
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August 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
- Tony.
- Tony.
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Scream? What scream? Damnit, where's the next chapter!?! Will better not be hurt! But then Jack could kidnap him to the Pearl and nurse him back to health...
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
evil evil lady!!! wha th f*ck!!! leaving us there .. there of all places.. grrrr argh.. oh lord i'm gonna have a heartattack before you update again.. please don't leave our poor boys just hangin there in the middle of a scream for long.. ummm.. can i jump jack if will doesn't do it soon ?? please.. lol.. love the set up.. poor will.. lovely jack.. so sexy.. grrr.. going now.. lol.. wren
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What??? You just left it there?? Hurry up and update! :)